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  1. Baradine
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    Quality Naruto fics

    From what little I read, it sounds more like she got mind raped than actual raped. Could be wrong though, I only read like 3 chapters back from the latest.
    Post by: Baradine, Nov 26, 2019 in forum: Story Search
  2. Baradine
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    You posted the wrong link for Rokudaime. EDIT: And thus it was fixed. Also, Inert is the best in the fandom (sorry Menace, you're too inactive), fight me.
    Post by: Baradine, Nov 21, 2019 in forum: Story Search
  3. Baradine
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    Maybe it'll have some later, but Hurricane Suite has like, half a scene of mild flirting between Naruto and Ino. You'd have to really stretch to call that a Nartuo/Ino story, at least in it's current iteration.
    Post by: Baradine, Oct 16, 2018 in forum: Story Search
  4. Baradine
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    You mean The Uzumaki's Peace? That's by Inert, a writer who uses the WbA in this very forum. He made a post two pages ago.
    Post by: Baradine, May 30, 2018 in forum: Story Search
  5. Baradine
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    The Otsutsuki were a mistake. Any sensible human being should do their utmost to forget anything that has to do with the Otsutsuki, including the Sage of the Six Paths shit, and pretend that something else happened instead. Also, other members of the Otsutsuki being god level threats is just completely stupid - the only reason Kaguya had that retard strength is because she ate from the 10 tailed tree whatever and gained chakra. Nothing had chakra before that tree thing. Why do these...
    Post by: Baradine, May 22, 2018 in forum: Story Search
  6. Baradine
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    Probably that Boruto sucks.
    Post by: Baradine, May 20, 2018 in forum: Story Search
  7. Baradine
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    The first line of that fic is wonderful. I can already tell this is gonna be one hell of a ride. Edit because holy fucking shit: This segue. Oh my dear god this segue, he was talking about entering the academy and then Itachi blurts out of fucking nowhere that his Uncle fucking killed himself? Did a fucking sociopath write this? Goddamn. That's ignoring the grammatical issues and the misunderstanding of beats and tags in the dialogue.
    Post by: Baradine, Jul 5, 2016 in forum: Story Search
  8. Baradine
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    Yeah, this story https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7745648/28/Legacy-of-Uzushiogakure Personally, I have it on alert, but I wouldn't really call it good. All the fucking OCs are named and styled after Fairy Tail characters (as in the manga if anyone's confused), and that personally is a really big pet peeve of mine - to name and use the personality of other works of fiction in your fanfiction - but maybe it won't be as irritating to some? The writing quality isn't bad, at least.
    Post by: Baradine, Jun 29, 2016 in forum: Story Search
  9. Baradine
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    Jesus christ those line breaks. Every time I see them I'm taken out of the story and want to gouge my eyes out with a spoon. Yeah, gonna have to pass on that one.
    Post by: Baradine, Jun 28, 2016 in forum: Story Search
  10. Baradine
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    I get you. I'm pretty disappointed too, though the author seems to claim it isn't abandoned. It's been like 5 months since then, though.
    Post by: Baradine, Feb 13, 2016 in forum: Story Search
  11. Baradine
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    Get to chapter 4. I understand that the story seems rather cliche in the beginning, but I believe that the author subverts those cliches in an interesting way. That's just me, though.
    Post by: Baradine, Feb 11, 2016 in forum: Story Search
  12. Baradine
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    Well, this story has never been recommended here (at least as far as I can tell), so why not. I'd put it up for review, but its getting close to two years old now. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495527/1/Konoha-s-Maelstrom Summary: If you have ridiculous chakra reserves, a forbidden technique that enables brute force training, and an insatiable appetite for epic skills, what are the chances that you'll settle for mediocrity? A bit of insanity is a small price to pay for being awesome....
    Post by: Baradine, Feb 10, 2016 in forum: Story Search
  13. Baradine
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    The Kyuubi speaks in a masculine manner (in the raw Japanese) in the canon.
    Post by: Baradine, Jan 24, 2016 in forum: Story Search
  14. Baradine
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    I dunno, put it up for review and we'll see, won't we?
    Post by: Baradine, Jan 2, 2016 in forum: Story Search
  15. Baradine
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    Quality Naruto fics

    Well, I don't want to be a dick, but read the thread. There have been several recommendations with a large amount of war in them, besides Lost Soul.
    Post by: Baradine, Oct 23, 2015 in forum: Story Search
  16. Baradine
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    He's a crap writer, but you contend that because he produces a lot of crap, instead of just a little bit, makes him better? Aight.
    Post by: Baradine, Sep 15, 2015 in forum: Story Search
  17. Baradine
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    http://i0.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/facebook/000/004/403/Girls.png no. No they're not.
    Post by: Baradine, Sep 13, 2015 in forum: Story Search
  18. Baradine
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    Well, it's either gay or some of the worst prose I've ever seen. Either way, avoid.
    Post by: Baradine, Jul 25, 2015 in forum: Story Search
  19. Baradine
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    Personally, I'd give that spot to Howling Wind, but we're just arguing semantics there.
    Post by: Baradine, Jul 13, 2015 in forum: Story Search
  20. Baradine
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    All by myself. Now stop worrying about being politically correct and post what you want.
    Post by: Baradine, Jun 11, 2015 in forum: Story Search
  21. Baradine
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    Don't be such a faggot.
    Post by: Baradine, Jun 11, 2015 in forum: Story Search
  22. Baradine
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    If it's any relief [SPOILER]
    Post by: Baradine, May 30, 2015 in forum: Story Search
  23. Baradine
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    Guilty pleasure. I like it, though I can see how it would turn a lot of people off.
    Post by: Baradine, May 29, 2015 in forum: Story Search
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    While I disagree with the Japanese openings (Rocks is awesome fuck everyone who says different) this was indeed awful.
    Post by: Baradine, Apr 5, 2015 in forum: Story Search
  25. Baradine
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    Posted in 2012. He was 15 then. Somehow, in three years, he has regressed in age by two! Incredible!
    Post by: Baradine, Mar 28, 2015 in forum: Story Search
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    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3541463/1/Genius-of-Konoha Abandoned, but fits those criteria.
    Post by: Baradine, Mar 26, 2015 in forum: Story Search
  27. Baradine
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    Not anymore, it's not. He's given up. I would know, I was beta-ing for him. He posted a chapter on the rewritten story, which I believe he then took down, about him giving up. He still hasn't replied back to me after my first beta edit.
    Post by: Baradine, Dec 8, 2014 in forum: Story Search
  28. Baradine
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    The Melody of the Fox covers Jiraiya training Naruto. Your mileage may vary, however, as it is Naruto/Tayuya and gets very, very fluffy with what I like to call "highschool drama". They don't actually go to highschool, though.
    Post by: Baradine, Dec 4, 2014 in forum: Story Search
  29. Baradine
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    I'll put in my recommendation for that story as well. Not only am I pretty certain it's been rec'd previously, for most of what I read comes from DLP, but I have been reading it since about chapter four. It is an excellent story. I'm not sure what those other guys are talking about, with Sasuke being charismatic. He's simply not screwed in the head, for reasons that become obvious later. Naruto, on the other hand, is less like a copy of Sasuke given a Naruto reskin, and more like a...
    Post by: Baradine, Nov 16, 2014 in forum: Story Search
  30. Baradine
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    You're supposed to link to the first chapter when recommending something. Please edit your post.
    Post by: Baradine, Oct 30, 2014 in forum: Story Search
  31. Baradine
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    Ninja'd by Pers.
    Post by: Baradine, May 8, 2014 in forum: Story Search
  32. Baradine
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    I've read it before. It's below average in my opinion. I may have gone further the first time I read it, but this time I stopped at chapter one. No plot hooks, the writing is mundane, and there are some annoying cliches as well, such as Naruto gathering them all together in the bell test and the rest of the team just going with it, resulting in the team passing with flying colors. 2/5.
    Post by: Baradine, Dec 13, 2013 in forum: Story Search
  33. Baradine
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    Quality Naruto fics

    There is also a personal favorite of mine, Hurricane Suite, which is by the same author who penned Patriot's Dawn. It hasn't updated in a while, though.
    Post by: Baradine, Nov 25, 2013 in forum: Story Search
  34. Baradine
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    While I wouldn't really call Little Wooden Men well done, It's kinda readable if you have the stomach for its failures. Hurricane Suite is a story that is simply incredible, and is gearing up for a war, but hasn't really reached that point yet. It also hasn't updated in a while, which is a real shame. It has a WbA if you want to check it out, though.
    Post by: Baradine, Sep 24, 2013 in forum: Story Search
  35. Baradine
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    If you really want to get technical with it, The Void by LD 1449 has a missing ninja Kushina. She's presumed dead, but she is a missing ninja. She's also not the focus of the story, which is what I assume you are looking for. Every other story that I've read about one of Naruto's parents being missing ninja has been utter shit.
    Post by: Baradine, Sep 24, 2013 in forum: Story Search
  36. Baradine
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    The Void by LD 1449 is pretty decent. Though, what you categorize as a good guy is up to you I suppose.
    Post by: Baradine, Sep 3, 2013 in forum: Story Search
  37. Baradine
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    Pretty sure this isn't what you're looking for, but Twenty Times Uzumaki Naruto Didn't Die has a pretty canon-ish Naruto, you know, if he was immortal and shit. Well, at least he's canon for the first ten or twelve vignettes. It's a one-shot, but Naruto remains pretty awesome regardless.
    Post by: Baradine, Aug 24, 2013 in forum: Story Search
  38. Baradine
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    I was posting a little off topic for the thread. I figured that a less than stellar quality is okay when someone was searching for a specific type of story.
    Post by: Baradine, Aug 21, 2013 in forum: Story Search
  39. Baradine
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    I haven't read most of these stories in a while, and subscribed to them when I was younger, and had a worse taste in stories. So they may be good, and they may be bad. I'll try to write down the impressions of the story along with the summary. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6130625/1/The-Untraveled-Path Summary: Minato Namikaze was certain that he would be sacrificing himself for his village. That was his duty as the Fourth Hokage. But what if his plan to sacrifice himself and seal the...
    Post by: Baradine, Aug 19, 2013 in forum: Story Search
  40. Baradine
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    Decently certain this isn't in here, possibly for good reason. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5742587/1/Little-wooden-men Naruto gets adopted at an early age. How far can he get with somebody actually supporting him? And how will he influence the Elemental nations? Rating for language. Quite simply, the beginning, at least for me, is terrible. Some hardcore Konoha Council bullshit (which I truly despise), but it shines through a little in the fact that Sarutobi doesn't really listen...
    Post by: Baradine, Jun 27, 2013 in forum: Story Search
  41. Baradine
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    Somebody was asking about this earlier, but this is a decent example of a strong, Team 7 centric fic. I'm not too sure how you guys will like the sealing premise, though. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6694302/1/Naruto-Myoushuu-no-Fuuin A seal had managed to defeat and imprison the Kyuubi no Kitsune, the strongest demon to ever exist. It was just ink on paper-or a stomach, as the case may be-and it held so much power… 'Yeah,' Naruto decided 'I gotta get me some of that.' Just read the whole...
    Post by: Baradine, Mar 25, 2013 in forum: Story Search
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