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  1. SmileOfTheKill
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    My issue with that story is it has a similar failure of many other alt-power stories. Starts off strong. Taylor kills Sophia and bam drama. Maybe what, 10k words of interesting story? Then BAM! ~60K words of people going, "but what should we do now?" "I dunno, how about you go back to being a story?"
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Apr 3, 2018 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    [Spoiler] I'm not a fan even though I wanted to be.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Jun 9, 2017 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I am trolling.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Apr 21, 2017 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I quote myself to say this. I was wrong. Simurgh Taylor is updating at an okay rate. Also this is me being slightly annoyed but yall should look at Khepri Ascendant. It's a great story being held back by the mean people at Spacebattles. 5/5, would hugbox again.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Apr 20, 2017 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I'm about 75% sure that this is an old as hell snippit brought back to life. I wouldn't trust this to update at a decent rate.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Apr 5, 2017 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    That is honestly my issue with the story. Having Taylor be a bit out of character by being super aggressive and having the story go places is fine, see Monster. When everyone is HYPERCHARAGED the story loses a lot of it's drama, even if the relative powerlevels are the same. The issue is I don't feel like the author has the skill to pull it off.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Mar 30, 2017 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I have news for you! I started to read The Slippery Slope by Ack. I will defend myself for that mistake because I started to read it on FF.net, where it is much easier to not notice the author. Also because I can pretend this story is worthy for a real review. Title: The Slipper Slope Author: ack Rating: T Genre: Hurt/Comfort/Crime Status: In-Progress Pairings: Taylor/OC Summary: When Taylor makes a new friend at Winslow, it's not as good a thing as it seems ... Word Count: 82,944 Link:...
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Mar 28, 2017 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I don't know good sir, I kind of like confused teenage Emily.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Dec 15, 2016 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Poor Saot. A cooler person than him said the same thing and he gets all the thumbs up. TIS OKAY SAOT I GAVE YOU THE THUMBS UP. It's a bit funny since I confused Zaralann with another terrible FF.net writer than uses that same program to make their avatar... that I should find out to complete the joke but that's hard yo. It's still okay though, Zaralann still has multiple harem stories and one !Gamer!!!!!!!! story. He also has stories written in some Greek looking language so odds are...
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Nov 23, 2016 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    You people are trolling me hard here. While CleanRag was closer to the truth, both of you are wrong. Si Vis Pacem is fully terrible and the only noticeable thing is how hard it attempts to railroad itself to the plot of Worm. I had to state this now because there was a slight possibility someone might attempt to read Si Vis Pacem based off of what you two said, and that is not allowed. In other news, I'm debating if I should put in a review of Centipede. It's amazing me how good...
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Nov 16, 2016 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I like how you included that last line. Well, the interlude is not what anyone wants and this story might as well be dead, but the chapter could be worse! Next update in that story is going to end on a cliffhanger with Amy deciding what to do followed by another six month delay. Honestly the story reminds me a lot of Centipede. Both are massive disappointments. With Centipede continuing to give Taylor everything and Absolution continuing to ride that cliffhanger for months, it really...
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Nov 7, 2016 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Back to Centipede. As much as it is a good story, I can't help feel massively disappointed by it currently. I think it's more because I was hoping the story would keep Taylor at a mid tier on the rating scales. I'm more interested in the kinds of tradeoffs she had to do with drugs and the like. It feels like the story has lost all sense of tradeoffs she had to deal with, besides the tiny amount of drugs in the background that don't seem to matter at all for the narrative. I just don't see...
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Oct 26, 2016 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I need to get that Aliens guy from the History Channel to say Dinah. It fits for what I think of that 'story'. That's just one part though. His biggest issue is his writing continues to be terrible. It's like bad Joss Whedon. So funny. Much wows. This is on top of the amazing info dump he gives for the people that didn't read Intrepid. No.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Oct 21, 2016 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    It's cute enough but it has non-author omake snips on the threadmarks and that makes me angry. Mostly since none of them are funny.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Oct 9, 2016 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    The best thing you can say about Burn Up is that it is finished. It starts a bit on the camp and wild side and it's funny. Sell Victoria's clothing to Amy type of deal. Then it gets more serious with her talking to Victoria and her fighting the PRT. Then it gets dark with her murdering a ton of rando's. Then she gets saved by the Undersiders and it gets chill. Also Taylor is OP. That tonal shift is not handled well in the writing at all. I would say only the first chapter or two really...
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Aug 19, 2016 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    That's because everything you write should be re-written. Ho ho ho. ... I don't know why I enjoy giving you a hard time Biigoh. It's all bad jokes, not serious. To be on topic. As Yak said, the new chapter in That Gnawing Worm was garbage and was re-worked to be below average... but have a terrible feel to it instead. It was really a shame, but it is written by the guy who wrote People Lie. The story all about non-humans pretending to be humans.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Jul 9, 2016 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I'm very confused at the recent normals vs Parahumans recently. I get that normals didn't do enough in canon and felt a little off, but now the opposite is true. I already forgot what fic that I read that had Piggot be like super!Accord to make the plot make a lick of sense. It reminds me of that one horrible normals vs Bleach where the normals used a bloody nuke on Aizen.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Jul 1, 2016 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    The reasons I had issues with the characters is not their personalities. Everyone talks in some grand tone. Not one conversation feels like a real human would be involved in except the one where the other teens told Laura to tell Coil to pissoff. I enjoy Coil in canon. He is a jerk through and through. My reason I dislike him in this story is the same reason I dislike Sarah. It might just be Coil's PoV that makes him sound like a tosser. However Sarah is just as wordy and 'grand' that I...
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Dec 31, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I'm looking over what I wrote and have figured out that I'm a horrible person. I hate everything about your story but I don't want to be an ass about it. It makes me feel bad. I mean you are doing better than I am since I haven't even written anything... Here it is anyways... It's pretentious. While I'm amused that you had Coil get killed, everything besides that made me go insane. The massive amounts of talking about history. History of the Bay, History of Crystal...
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Dec 31, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I'm going to start reading it, but I already feel like I'm going to have some issues. One reason, one word. "!Rational!"
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Dec 31, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    The redeeming factor is that there are now two stories that fit the bill of everything you said that is wrong with this ME/Worm cross. I honestly thought you where talking about Exiled.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Nov 13, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Up until the house was put on fire, it could have worked. I was expecting Taylor to use the stun baton (another red herring that was pointless) when she notices some type of crime and gets into a fight. She can win or lose, but the point is that could be the climax and how her wish in the end was to just improve everything since everything is terrible. Exalt then and bam decent place to lead off of. I was amazed at the leap of logic on how she gets sold by the Mechants to Oni Lee....
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Aug 10, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Biigoh, it is impressive on how fast that story just exploded. The author seems to have gone for one of the biggest red herrings, by making all the earlier chapters pointless and comical to read.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Aug 10, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
  24. SmileOfTheKill
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    The title alone is a review for this story. Painfully edgy and 'cool' storytelling. Just like the name suggests.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Jul 11, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    It's gotten to such a silly point that I gave up. The best part of that story was when Sophia and Taylor had their humanizing moments after [spoiler] After that Taylor became increasing OP and for not much of a story. The character moments are nice. Then it started to be about the plot as they removed all the side characters to make way of Taylor being OP. The plot of an OP character fighting things is boring and pointless. I can go read a bad Superman story if I want that. It's more of...
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Jun 21, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I think that oneshot was the closest I've ever seen a story not exist. Things got said, but it was of so little interest that not a single thing is memorable about it, except for how painfully average it was.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Jun 12, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I want to write a oneshot with Taylor going home some point when she is in the deep, but before S9. Then Danny says Kiddo every time he talks to her anew. She figures out he is under Master control and runs away to get backup.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Jun 9, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    It became Warframe. AKA the plot does not matter, just fight cool things.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Jun 4, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    What a surpriseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Jun 2, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Falls into the trappings of crack that makes me dislike it since it just ignores all characterization since humor is easier that way, but it is decent enough for failing that.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, May 4, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Fucking Tinkers updated again. After commenting on the tone of the story, violetshadows also posted a spoiler of where the story is going. It is this one. I'm done with the story due to it.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, May 2, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    So the next update of Fucking Tinkers is out. They fight The Slenderman and it is dark. I bet the next boss they have to live through getting raped or something equally silly.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Apr 17, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Meh. I want to see a comedy that keeps the serious tone of the story, but has fun with it. That story instead follows the idea that a comedy is just crack that completely ignores characters for jokes.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Mar 29, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Biigoh, have you decided that story is serious again?
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Mar 22, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I'm going to cheat and link three snips by the author and one quote from the authors note after said snip. One snip with Taylor/Lungs Second snip with Taylor/Lungs Third snip with Taylor/Lungssss If Dragonfly doesn't end with Lungs/Skitter, I will eat my hat or whatever that expression is.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Mar 16, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I think I would enjoy this story more if not for the fact that the author is a massive Lungs/Weaver shipper. It makes every interaction between Weaver and Lungs to feel incredibly forced. Such as her bouncing ideas off of Lungs. It doesn't feel like a desperate action taken by Weaver because of the lack of Tattletale, it feels like a reason to start the shipping.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Mar 15, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Just reading that quote makes me very exited for the edited version. Once touch ups are done, Worm shall not be a pain to re-read. Fanon Taylor has well, fanonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Mar 7, 2015 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Considering how insane the Worm universe is, all you need is one small change to go truly crazy. I very much disagree with the idea that the more you change the more interesting it can be, as it can already be quite interesting.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Nov 29, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    SB has the Worm authors blowing up again due to the story getting locked. I'm still amused. Also, even though it has been stated before. Ack is such a terrible writer and Ox's post is the best idea yet.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Aug 25, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Hope Comes to Brockton Bay got locked in SB for someeee reason. I don't care why, I'm just amused how happy I am that it got locked.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Aug 25, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    That is because most people are stupid and want to read Taylor making friends with The Undersiders again. For the people here, not only are you wrong about saying we don't want to read it, it doesn't matter what we think. If you want to write it, write it.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Aug 21, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Copacetic is looking like a mini-In Flight for me. Anyone else feeling the same thing or is it me being an idiot?
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Aug 9, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    I thought about what I would do when I was teenage age and if had an experience bad enough to trigger. I'm thinking I wouldn't need any supernatural influence to do something a bit drastic, for good or bad.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Aug 4, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Ack is amazing. He reminds of someone that can only write fanfiction of fanfiction, so the characters are horribly off.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Aug 2, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Sorry, slightly out of my mind. My annoyance with her is simple. The setting offers so much more than Taylor joining the wards and fighting with Sophia. I just want Sophia to be used as a simple character, not a core feature of a story. Tis like the Lungs fight. One of the most overused things is the trio at this point.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Aug 2, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    There is a large difference between dealing with Sophia or a Sophia/Taylor buddy buddy cop movie. Follow that, you can't have Taylor join the Wards with her knowing who Sophia is while she is unpunished without having the suicide option. Here are some simple ways to deal with it. You can punish Sophia and she gets removed from story early. Free bonding points between Taylor and the wards. Just about every story uses this though. You ignore Taylors characterization and just have her be...
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Aug 2, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Like I commented in SB. I don't get why people care so much about Sophia and friends. She was just a small and boring part of a larger story, and I think no one would care about her if people didn't keep talking about her ton because of people endlessly analyzing the locker scene. She had her time in the Worm story and not only was it fulfilling, I can't see of a better way to use that character. People also seem to forget the state in Taylor at the start of the story as well... being...
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Aug 2, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    That is why I compared it to a game. As you said, it is one thing if it was just a bunch of teenagers doing some crazy things for fun and protest... but them being that strong as well? Bleh.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Jun 17, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    It reminds me of Jet Set Radio. Stuff is an amazing set piece for a game, but for a story? It just feels off. I know it is possible for such actions to occur considering how Worm is on what constitutes as a power, but it still feels wonky.
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Jun 17, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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    Copacetic updated. Just fixed the latest chapter. Now Danny isn't horribly off, but Taylor wasn't written so now she is slightly off herself! Yay? http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/13980762/
    Post by: SmileOfTheKill, Apr 23, 2014 in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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