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  1. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    Same here, I think it came out just right, especially when we take into account that they are still scheming how to save their asses while sacrificing the fodder. MonkeyEpoxy, you really nailed it with that title you came up so long ago.
    Post by: Himuradono, May 30, 2017 in forum: Games
  2. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    I know it's silly but every time I see one of the Blades refer to Aethyta as Mama Fish it tickles me pink. As for Aethyta's old team, I hope they live up to the reputation of: crests to the wall, kill'em all.
    Post by: Himuradono, Dec 26, 2016 in forum: Games
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    Now if only we could fit the hanar in that equation...
    Post by: Himuradono, Mar 10, 2016 in forum: Games
  4. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    You know... I suspected. Seriously. Go. Read. The. Files. All of them. And a fuckton of your questions will be answered. Right now you're meandering. You grasp some things really, really well but you're off the mark about others, and worse of all you mix your spot on speculation with syed levels of being lost in the fog. ;) Check the files, they will clear a lot. You already cottoned to a lot of hints. Read the: The Systems Alliance Addenda File. Then the, Officer Edition Hit the...
    Post by: Himuradono, Feb 26, 2016 in forum: Games
  5. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    Nemrut: Did you read A season of sorrows unending -- the Cerberus Files : Citadel Races ?
    Post by: Himuradono, Feb 26, 2016 in forum: Games
  6. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    But for example social issues(privilege, preferential treatment, initial startup point) are tied up into being a member of the Thirty, Clans, Clanless(for asari) and being one is very much a hereditary, lineage based result. You don't get more DNA-special-snowflake than being one of the Thirty and that translates into a plethora of advantages, one of which is social station and your startup position within it. Like we have ab-humans in WH40k: ratlings, navigators, ogryns and so on. We...
    Post by: Himuradono, Feb 26, 2016 in forum: Games
  7. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    Dude, that is a Thing in the Premiverse. You have that flat out stated pretty much, and in some cases not so in your face but it's there. :) You're hitting a lot of nails. Check LP's website and the forum in particular(Speculation thread). A lot of that info is strewn throughout the story and addenda files, pointing that at one point or another almost all species had been messed with. That's a theme. EDIT: To a point you're right about lineage, ancestors in the case of the SIX and the...
    Post by: Himuradono, Feb 26, 2016 in forum: Games
  8. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    I'll just also add that Anderson obviously messed something up and did so in a spectacular manner: Before the FCW, at the inception of SA Special Forces program David Anderson is a lieutenant while Rachel Florez a corporal and that after being knocked down in rank after one offense or another. Please note that this wasn't the first time she had been busted down in rank. (Lions in blue and silver) In 2176, Anderson is a lieutenant commander while Florez is a full colonel. See the...
    Post by: Himuradono, Feb 26, 2016 in forum: Games
  9. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    New chapter almost done, and undergoing final polish. Nemrut: LogicalPremise asked to tell you that Team Fuck You is a go and will feature in the fic. Congrats, man. We don't get to see much of Shepard and Revenant gang but Garrus and his team are making alien salsa on Omega. Place must be stinking worse than a butcher's shop by now. Oh yeah, Aethyta makes a cameo. Only a few lines between her and Aria but goddammit you just can't help but despise the Queen Matriarch of Asari. The...
    Post by: Himuradono, Jan 28, 2016 in forum: Games
  10. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    New chapter currently being beta read.
    Post by: Himuradono, Jan 22, 2016 in forum: Games
  11. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    Yeah, I kind of get what you're getting at. I had the same problem a few years back... It went beyond pet peeve and infuriated me more than was reasonably healthy to get worked over by fan fiction. I literally felt like gnashing my teeth as I hit the big red button and X the story. Surprisingly, it went away on its own and I could once again enjoy a fic with Japanese words sprinkled here and there. I blame all the naruto fiction I read years ago where every second word seemed to be Japanese.
    Post by: Himuradono, Nov 15, 2015 in forum: Games
  12. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    I'm thoroughly satisfied with this chapter, especially the parts involving TIM and Mordin. Yes, this part was pretty great. Why dirty your own hands and risk the possibility of getting ODINed by the cyborg you built when you can use your enemy to do your dirty work? The Illusive Man is one Magnificent Bastard Ascendant once again. Richard Williams could only hope to look so cool doing his stuff. He was pretty open with Shepard during their interaction in this chapter. I wouldn't go and...
    Post by: Himuradono, Nov 15, 2015 in forum: Games
  13. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    New chapter in beta group. Almost exclusively pure dialog. A lot of TIM/Shepard coverage and LP is really hitting his Mordin Voice.
    Post by: Himuradono, Nov 14, 2015 in forum: Games
  14. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    How about a secret agreement between the Big Three to work towards the destruction of Batarian Hegemony. By destruction I don't necessarily mean it in literal sense. Bankruptcy, social collapse, founding and funding insurgents, assassinating people who are working towards making the Hegemony a better place(I know, a laughable notion, but hey), stealing whatever technological breakthroughs they make and claiming them for themselves(the Big Three). I'm thinking something on the order of...
    Post by: Himuradono, Nov 1, 2015 in forum: Games
  15. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    Chapter 23 in beta group. :)
    Post by: Himuradono, Oct 31, 2015 in forum: Games
  16. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    The former.
    Post by: Himuradono, Oct 26, 2015 in forum: Games
  17. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    Welp... in that case I got to say that Okeer at least proved competent and his chosen successor won't suck as much as the armless-wonder-Ezykle-Abadon(badass name btw). That's cute. Was it him who provided the krogans she raised and made her bodyguards? Religious experience, coming this week. ;) ---------- Post automerged 10-26-2015 at 03:18 PM ---------- Previous post was 10-25-2015 at 06:18 PM ---------- New chapter in beta group. Garrus. The Council. Aria. Mordin.
    Post by: Himuradono, Oct 26, 2015 in forum: Games
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    But was it an official title or self-appointed?
    Post by: Himuradono, Oct 25, 2015 in forum: Games
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    Jesus, the feeling of guilt this alone will generate in Shepard will be of truly divine proportions. I foresee there will be lines about feeling unworthy of Liara, etc. because she 'strayed' in her widowhood. Dear god, why? I feel for you, LP. The image alone... gah! <brain bleach>
    Post by: Himuradono, Oct 23, 2015 in forum: Games
  20. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    Good news!:D I don't know how he did it but LogicalPremise churned out another chapter. 25+ pages of absolute, blood pumping action and techno horror as we delve deeper into Okeer's HQ. The chapter is being beta'd right now. Rejoice. :)
    Post by: Himuradono, Oct 19, 2015 in forum: Games
  21. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    LOL My review from 15 min ago: I forgot to add in my review that 5 Coloured Walker made a good observation about being careful not to make Jack into a 'Weaker Shepard Clone'. She has to be her own character standing on her own legs, with noticeable similarities between her and Shep but also fundamentally different.
    Post by: Himuradono, Oct 9, 2015 in forum: Games
  22. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    It's neat, and Jack doesn't evoke roll-eyes-anger in me so far... so, obviously better than canon.
    Post by: Himuradono, Oct 9, 2015 in forum: Games
  23. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    Motivations behind her actions. What pushed her to join a corsair outfit? What's her take on being a biotic? Is she resentful that's she's different or does she like her blue glow? Is she a mercenary looking for a quick profit? Or do her actions have a deeper meaning and she treats Shepard, her former corsair gig as means towards some nebulous end(training, gathering experience, making connections and getting to know people that could be useful to her objectives...)?
    Post by: Himuradono, Oct 8, 2015 in forum: Games
  24. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    If I remember my Premiverse lore correctly, then: Old Ones - Leviathans aka Low Ascended High Ones - Reapers aka Ascended. Then we had the High Ascended which were the leviathan precursor race - full on godpower fuckery. That's so far in the past they are older than sin. Old Ones are all that's left of the High Ascended but they are but pale imitations. More to come later when I have time. I'll just say I wasn't very impressed with the witch doctor medicine man and would have...
    Post by: Himuradono, Aug 31, 2015 in forum: Games
  25. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    Well I think the asari, especially the Thirty, are about ten seconds from flipping out and thinking they have an ardat-yaksi matriarch on the loose. The finger-pointing who exactly spawned that one's going to be epic. And hilarious. Just imagine those thirty old bags snarking and pulling all kinds of dirty shit on each other trying to figure out which two of them boinked and hid a kid of theirs. I can see it already: A accusing B she wasn't seen for some time eight hundred years ago. And...
    Post by: Himuradono, Aug 26, 2015 in forum: Games
  26. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    The confirmation of somebody being alive never felt so ominous.
    Post by: Himuradono, Aug 22, 2015 in forum: Games
  27. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    I'm all for Reapers being cast as this unimaginable threat no one can really grasp because of how Other the Reapers actually are. Think Outsiders from Dresden - yeah, they can shrug off pretty much everything you throw at them. Unless you know how to throw shit at them; vide The Merlin and The Gatekeeper, stonewalling an army of Outsiders charging their ranks while Wizards were in full retreat. Notice that all the way up to Arrival DLC Reapers had that slight Lovecraftina vibe going on for...
    Post by: Himuradono, Aug 21, 2015 in forum: Games
  28. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    I actually found myself liking the initial opening and the following discussion between Chambers and Shepard even if it was mostly Chambers monologuing with Shepard only offering a number of replies or questions. You are right it is a bit of a 'no, no, no, don't do this'. And it felt a bit jarring when I read that part about Freud. Good old Ziggy just isn't in the vogue anymore. But hell, maybe in a century or two he will back in fashion. The psycho-babble was a bit spotty and all I got...
    Post by: Himuradono, May 24, 2015 in forum: Games
  29. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    I don't see what the fuss about EDI is. Really, we have Vigil; and EDI just doesn't compare. Vigil>EDI. No brainer there. (MonkeyEpoxy, this is more about the reviews than just your post). Loved the last two chapters and am quite happy for the potential Miri/Shep friendship. Besides, Shep's new batcave gifted to her by TIM is simply amazeballs. P.S. Welcome to the DLP, LogicalPremise.
    Post by: Himuradono, Apr 22, 2015 in forum: Games
  30. Himuradono
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    WIP Of Sheep and Battle Chicken by LogicalPremise - M - Mass Effect

    I'm up to date with both stories and the additional material he posted. gonna be straight up here and say that, yes, at times I'm very exasperated with this series. Yes, more than once I considered dropping this series but F found myself returning to it. Rereading it. And waiting for new updates. So there you have it. It's a YMMV. Pure and simple. As was stated before, the world building is simply amazing and a real joy to explore and get to know this expanded ME verse. The author put a...
    Post by: Himuradono, Mar 25, 2015 in forum: Games
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