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Quality Naruto fics

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Inert, Feb 17, 2012.

  1. purple

    purple Groundskeeper DLP Supporter

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    It is known.
     
  2. magglez

    magglez First Year

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    If you lot are as desperate as you seem to be, I recommend going on to Inert's FFN page and checking out his favorited stories as they are mostly pretty good. And while you're there, check out the revised version of Hurricane Suite. It was great originally, but now I consider it to be one of the best Naruto fics out there.
     
  3. Ched

    Ched Da Trek Moderator DLP Supporter ⭐⭐

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    Just finished reading "The Leaf's Naruto" and I quite like it. If the quality keeps up at the rate it is going then it'll be worth putting in For Review once it's a bit longer. Around 40k words maybe? At any rate, I liked it.

    It's a time travel fic, but that's not thrown too much in the reader's face. Naruto is happily running around changing things, but at the same time he's trying to keep it in the background so that a lot of the story progresses in a similar fashion to before. For example:
    Naruto kills Gato and Mizuki, assassination style, and isn't even suspected of doing so. He does this before his Genin Exam. But he still takes the Genin Exam and hides a lot of his skill, though he certainly takes pains to not come off as the near-talentless genin he actually was back then.

    Also, despite having the requisite skill, Naruto wasn't the Hokage in the original timeline. Kakashi took over after Tsunade and Konohomaru after that, with Naruto being passed over because he was too valuable to have behind a desk. I actually quite liked that solution.
    Preliminary 4/5 for me here too, with potential to go up depending on where the story ends up going. We're certainly seeing a lot of changes to keep things interesting, but I'm equally glad that we aren't seeing too many more changes.
     
  4. Knyght

    Knyght Alchemist

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    Pretty sure I've read almost all those fics at some point. TBH, most of them fall under "Almost Recommendable".
     
  5. blob

    blob Seventh Year

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    I have some problems with Iron Soul. Namely:

    - Not using ANY Japanese (suffixes etc) makes the story seem strange at some points

    - Ebisu seems to be a bit too different from Canon, and a bit too strong

    - Neji is mostly alright, but Tenten is overpowered - she's simply weak in Canon, and there weren't really any reasons for her to grow here - and yet she's killing chuunin as a relatively fresh genin without too much problems

    - Killing off Orochimaru seemed somewhat believable, but still rubbed me the wrong way. I doubt that such a strong mofo with a penchant for surviving being dissected by Kyuubi-powered Naruto with 4 tails would be dead just like that

    - Naruto's latest 'weapon' sounds so fucking overpowered it's almost laugable. He's got essentially a Ninja-like Sniper Rifle, which is seemingly completely unstoppable, can be elongated far enough to kill people from almost laughable distances in a fraction of a second (vide Gaara assassination) and has practically no drawbacks. At this point, there is no need for Naruto to train anymore - he could kill practically anyone in the Elemental Countries (except perhaps Tobi with his space/time fuckery) in under a second by decapitation. If there is nothing that can't stop it, he could just kill any of the powerhouses like Itachi, Pein or Kisame without them even noticing what is going on as long as he saw them.

    At this rate, all of the toughest guys around will be dead before Naruto's 13th birthday.


    For now, I'd say 3/5 - some of the later developments just seem a bit too unbelievable.
     
  6. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    Well... It's Gaara. Canon Naruto beat him, and broke through his shield with his fists alone. Gaara also never moves at this point, he stands there and lets the sand do shit.

    It's not that much of a stretch that a Naruto that doesn't suck ass wouldn't have too much trouble. Canon Lee could have done that if he'd had a Chakra weapon. Imagine Canon Lee with a weapon sharp enough to cut through the sand. Not that unlikely, considering he could break it by hand. Lee takes off his weights, goes for a surprise decapitation in the forest. I hardly think that Gaara would do any better in that situation.

    That doesn't mean that canon Lee would be any good versus everybody but Tobi.

    It seems like any Chunin with enough speed could kill Gaara if he had a weapon that sharp, and any Jounin could with his hands. Gaara was kinda overhyped.
     
  7. mangaguy

    mangaguy Fifth Year

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    Meh, I don't mind a lot of Naruto fanfiction that was lambasted here so my standards are probably lower than average, but here are some fics I found tolerable enough.
    Notable for being the only female Naruto I can tolerate. It would have probably been better without the romance though. It was also kinda hard for me to suspend my disbelief at certain points, most notably
    the conclusion of the Wave arc and Hinata's all-knowing clan library.
    But altogether it wasn't terrible.

    A nice little AU with Naruto around Itachi's age group and Itachi being the Hokage. In general, I really like reading Naruto as a teacher type stories so this was cool. Sasuke's pretty normal here too and that's always nice.

    Probably the best videogame!naruto there is. It seems to be the best planned and it's entertaining soo...
     
  8. Two excellent (IMO - Can't speak for anyone else, obviously) not-a-psychopath timetraveler!Sasuke fanfics, both gen. As I recall, neither involves Itachi much, unfortunately.

    End of One World, by Esama
    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3891432/1/End-of-one-world
    With his fire cold and all he left behind in ruin, Sasuke gives up his life and trusts in his brother's word. Time travel, spoilers, REVIVED
    Notes: Incomplete and rarely updated, but over 90,000 words and totally worth the wait.

    Beginnings, by Rayneken
    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5698239/1/Beginnings
    Naruto was six years old when he met the man who changed his life. ...Now he's kind of just hoping he survives it.
    Notes: Very Narutocentric, despite his not being the time traveler. Fluffy, angsty - I love it to bits. If you're looking for an action-packed story, though, this is not for you.
     
  9. Ched

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    Just read End of One World and enjoyed it. Will try the other one another day. Good recommendation (no slash btw -- just so folks know. Esama tends to write a lot of slash but that wasn't one of them.)

    Edit: Beginnings is a bit too cutesy for me, especially given that Naruto/Sasuke are meant to be Academy age.
     
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    bombdiggity92 Temporarily Banhammered

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    I would like to recommend signs by the author d'ihshtri, features Naruto with a doujutsu, and raised by Madara. Sounds gay but it's relatively breath of fresh air, shows a prodigy Naruto, but it's done well.
     
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    Aerylife Not Equal

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    The amount of slash in his favorites makes me wary, but I'll try it.
     
  13. bombdiggity92

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    I don't think I've ventured into his favourites, but he does have one slash story up. There has been no indication of slash in Signs that I've been able to spot. I think it would fit in with with almost recommendable, but I'm not much of a thread started. So, I doubt I'll ever post anything there.
     
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    Betosa Third Year

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    There is no doubt about his reading sexual inclination, thankfully he limits it in Signs.
    I believe he predicted the negative sannin energy among other things.
     
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    Itachi washing Naruto's hair was pretty gay. Other than that one scene, it's alright. Some tense and plural/singular issues, and the way he begins scenes without revealing the names of the characters involved - I assume to be mysterious - is just confusing.
     
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    I read the Rewritten and it is decent fic not overly good but not that bad either.

    It is a peggy sue fic about Naruto going to the his parents time change things, stop the bad guy, bang Sasuke's mum etc. nothing original really. But there isn't any angst or pointless drama so a decent time waster overall.

    Edit: wait Dark Minion you don't know Life in Konoha's ANBU? It is in WBA here.
     
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    Shezza posted Life in Konoha's ANBU in the WbA forum and it is pretty damn awesome. Naruto is himself in all the ways that matter, but with a good smattering of competence and common sense. Sarutobi is also pretty damn cool as well.
     
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