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"A Song of Ice and Fire" stories

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by purple, Jul 9, 2012.

  1. Sn0rkack

    Sn0rkack Professor

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    Already found 2 members of the harem. I'm guessing Dany will be the third, maybe Marg rounding the group out as the 4th.

    "Hey, Sansa. What's up?" he asked, and she blushed right down to the roots of her hair.

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    "Not many people are so enthusiastic when they see me," Tyrion said. "You must be Mr. Uzumaki, the one that my sister talks so much about."
    "That'd be me," Naruto said, smiling. Then he paused, and frowned. "She talks about me?"
    "Oh, all the time. She's always been fascinated with the man who saved her life," Tyrion said, with just a hint of condescension. "It gets a bit annoying actually."

    Oh fuck me I'm dying right now, I just read this line...This is too much.

    Naruto literally beat this attitude out of her, encouraging her to stand up for herself, and began to teach her kenjutsu, or the technique of the sword. Since then, she'd grown into one of the most proficient sword masters in Winterfell. Even Ned Stark had a hard time beating her with a sword.
     
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  2. Cxjenious

    Cxjenious Dark Lord

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    That emboldened line is as far as I got.
     
  3. ManuMetalMaster

    ManuMetalMaster Squib

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    Has the author really mentioned if Naruto's harem will consist only of four girls? Seeing as Most Naruto crossovers consist of him dipping his dick in every girl he comes across...

    Anyways, I have another ASoIaF story for you guys:

    Rebellion, Treason and Plot
    by joely_jo
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    Rating: M
    Status: WiP, nine chapters (over 40k words) so far.
    Pairings: Ned/Cat, Rhaegar/Lyanna

    Summary: Amid the turbulent waters of the Trident, a simple twist of fate allows the path of the Rebellion to alter – Prince Rhaegar Targaryen kills Robert Baratheon with a sword strike to the chest and the Royalist forces emerge victorious. But for the leaders of the Rebellion, and their families, the future suddenly looks very bleak.

    If your favorite part of ASoIaF/GoT is the southron game and King's Landing intrigue and politics then this fic is for you. Most PoV's are Ned and Cat but the author has slipped Lyanna, Arthur Dayne and Rhaegar's too.
    It features my favorite fanfic!Rhaegar too as he comes off as a very complex and conflicted character. Also, if you're expecting beautiful, perfect and flawless Lyanna you'll be disappointed as there are times that she's even more of a bitch than Cersei.
    It feels shippy and slow at times but manages to keep you entertained and wondering what the author will write next.
     
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  4. Captain Trips

    Captain Trips High Inquisitor

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    A Song of Magic and Chakra might beat your story as best Game of thrones crossover if it keeps droppin gems like that, right Cxjenious?
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    No, just kidding.
     
  5. Sn0rkack

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    I checked this out and Lyann's attitude made me stop reading. Like how she's all, "I wanted freedom, and in Dorne you can fuck who you want when you want!" meanwhile the person she's cheating with is betraying their Dornish spouse...and causing a fucking war. The author's explanation of Lyanna's decision just killed it for me.
     
  6. ManuMetalMaster

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    Like I previously said, Lyanna is a bitch in that story and it only becomes worse since she's in a position of power when no one dares to point out any of her faults unless they want her (and Rhaegar by proxy) as an enemy. Several people have the same issue with her attitude but the author has stated that's what he/she was aiming for: both Rhaegar and Lyanna are flawed individuals. And that's exactly why I like the story because, with the few information we have about their canon personalities, most writers choose to make Rhaegar the handsome, fair, perfect and kind knight and Lyanna his untameable, beautiful, brave and flawless damsel in distress while in truth Rhaegar was a selfish man who led his kingdom into war, cheated on his wife, dishonored his children and got them killed because he couldj't keep it in his pants, prophecy or not. And Lyanna was a girl that escaped with the crown prince while promised to another man (not the most honorable thing to do). It's refreshing to read a story where Rhaegar has to fix his mess and where Lyanna not only chose him for love but for power as well.

    If it's any consolation, the last paragraph of the latest chapter suggest Lyanna might be getting what it's coming for her. It's not confirmed so we have to wait and see if the author has guts to pull it off.

    EDIT: tl;dr Selfish Lyanna was so busy having awesome northern sex with Rhaegar that she didn't have time to think about his Dornish wife.
     
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  7. Dagro

    Dagro DA Member

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    Don't forget this about A Song of Magic and Chakra:



    Most of the people around the courtyard sweatdropped, and Naruto turned around to see the King chuckling quietly.
    Right before snapping Jamie's sword...

    I know, after the first chapter that is a technicality...
     
  8. Demons In The Night

    Demons In The Night Chief Warlock

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    Why are there so many goddamn modern AU aSoIaF fics on fanfiction.net? Seriously, like half the fics on the first few pages are modern AU's.
    And why do people even write these fics in the first place? They are only very tangentially related and really can't even be considered aSoIaF fics.
     
  9. Nuit

    Nuit Dark Lord

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    Not just limited to ffn, quite a bit of them on ao3 are also Modern AU.
     
  10. ManuMetalMaster

    ManuMetalMaster Squib

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    People write those Modern AUs because they find easier to write about a time period they know or because they are too lazy to research the lore. I mean, who in his right mind would write a story featuring political intrigue, tragedy, warfare and magic when you can write about Sansa seducing Professor Sandor or Arya and Gendry getting down and dirty in the janitor's closet?

    Most of them are just there for the shipping. Of course, there must be some exceptions.
     
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  11. Jarik

    Jarik Chief Warlock

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    I think people just want to write their own original, high school romance fic. However, they're less likely to get readers if they just posted it up somewhere as original fiction, so they make it a fanfic and get more exposure like that.

    That and they can be lazy about characters. Where in an original fiction, they'd have to introduce and write a character people can sympathize with and like, in fanfiction they can win the audience's favour simply by using the same name (even if the character is written completely differently and with a completely different background).
     
  12. Sn0rkack

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    Yeah but if they wanted exposure they would use like Twilight or something. Not many people check out ASOIAF and GOT compared to other sections.

    Newest update to A Better Fate was pretty boss, fire and blood, gg.
     
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  13. Cxjenious

    Cxjenious Dark Lord

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    It seemed rather boring, to me. The writing, that is.

    EDIT: Check out this lovely little gem. Lanathena Daenerys Tarzan (or something like that), a fallen star-witch-veela girl falls in love with Tom Riddle, all the while hanging out with her friends Steve and Jack. Best part? Definitely the outfits. You can totally copy and past the url's into your web browser and like, see them with your eyes.
     
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  14. ManuMetalMaster

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    I read the author's profile. Guess what? A Mary Sue writing a Mary Sue.

    I think... I think the universe just broke...

    EDIT: But seriously, the story can be saved if Athena's "awesomeness" makes her go supernova and we get a kick-ass story about wizards floating in space and trying to rebuild society.
     
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  15. Cxjenious

    Cxjenious Dark Lord

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    There's no saving this story. Death is its only salvation. Kill it. Kill it dead!
     
  16. Captain Trips

    Captain Trips High Inquisitor

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    Thats a lot of hate, are you jealous of the story Cxjenious?
     
  17. Cxjenious

    Cxjenious Dark Lord

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    Totally jealous. I actually feel kind of bad though. I left a review, and got a frowny-face from the author in reply. She can't be over sixteen. Probably not even over fourteen.

    And I just crushed her dreams.
     
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  18. purple

    purple Groundskeeper DLP Supporter

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    Any chance we could keep the shitty stories out of here? Thanks
     
  19. Sn0rkack

    Sn0rkack Professor

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    "You are so beautiful Athena, I love you so much and I cant tell you how sorry I am for it taking me so long to realise my feelings but I knew the moment I first set eyes on you across that courtyard that I loved you and I must have you"

    Classic Voldemort.
     
  20. Hello

    Hello Professor

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    Story is dead. Code 1 take down, which means admins.
     
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