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WIP The Havoc Side of the Force by Tsu Doh Nimh - T - HP/Star Wars

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Hw597, Oct 9, 2012.

  1. Russano

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    Not sure I'd like that. Also reading, Last Second Savior by Plums. They just had a meeting with Yoda and had the super cool super special Harry just act like a total twat to Yoda about how wrong he was. It was straight from the !IndyHarry acts publicly grandstands to Dumbledore about how wrong he is, everyone watching immediately agrees, then Dumbledore proceeds to take it as if Harry was totally right.

    Although, I wouldn't mind if he makes the observation on the similarities or has some isolated byplay with HK about it.
     
  2. Hero of Stupidity

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    Yeah, but that's plums, he writes smut... and Tsu Doh would probably wirte a better scene then Riley(sorry).
     
  3. Riley

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    Of course their scene is gonna be better. They're a better writer.
     
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  4. shakeval

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    Riley Poole 'They're'

    i have this feeling that it will be a while until harry gets anywhere near the jedi temple, too many stuffy monks.
    i'm more interested in what sort of upgrades harry will be getting for his ship, you know he won't settle for normal 'civilian' kit, HK would agree that military grade would be more appropriate.
    but i'm sure there will be some sort of adventures involved with that.
     
  5. Riley

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    Edit. I can be a idjit sometimes.
     
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    . . . second 'their' dude
    'Their a better writer'
    'They're a better writer'
     
  7. Riley

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    Fuck I'm blind and stupid. My bad.
     
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    ...AN idjit.
     
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  9. Russano

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    I know, but the whole "too cool for the wise old mentor" crap is usually pretty awful.
     
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    yes, an idjit with just enough knowledge to be dangerous ;)
     
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    Basically this. Especially when said mentor is a millennia old.

    Whenever i see it written i get this feeling that the author was one of those kids that thought they were smarter than the mean teacher, and this is them living out their fantasy... Lol
     
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    The sad thing about Plums story is that it had the potential for a quality SW. The beginning was quite ok until he locked up in this horrible alien harem trope, merged magic with the force and then this Yoda nonsense.
     
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    I just couldn't get behind thinking head tentacles are attractive, lol...
     
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    Pretend they're pigtails. Big, fleshy pigtails.
     
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    Sounds disgusting.
     
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    So I take, you are not big on Japan, are you?
     
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    To imply Japan is all about tentacle porn does a criminal disservice to such an amazingly beautiful country.

    I'll assume you said that in jest though, in which case:

    Ha ha
     
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    You're telling me Japan isn't all about the tentacle porn?
     
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    ...I thought it was.

    That, and their obsession with school girl outfits.
     
  20. Russano

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    Or their combining of school girl outfits and tentacle porn.

    I don't really get the whole Twilek obsession either. Seems like every crossover for SW I've ever read was an Aayla Secura wankfest.




    It's not even the bashing of the old mentor figure that I can't stand. It's the the super public confrontation where everyone watches a pretentious grandstanding twat rip into their most revered figure while saying, "We should of known it all along! I'm so disappointed in him!"
     
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