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Quality Naruto fics

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Inert, Feb 17, 2012.

  1. Satan

    Satan Third Year

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    The ones I'm currently reading that have updated this year and I didn't find in any other threads.

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10055892/1/Just-A-Little-Fuel

    Alive!Kushina/Minato

    Naruto inherits Kurama's negative emotion sensing from the Kurama in Kushina, while his twin sister has other half of him sealed in her.

    Being able to sense the negativity in people causes him believe that humanity's true self is what he's sensing. This belief causes him to develop into a psychopathic mastermind and gain a fetish for provoking hatred and despair in people, making it into a constant habit.

    I'd say it's YMMV because Naruto can be really taking-candy-from-a-baby-douchy at times.


    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8760285/1/A-Thousand-Hands

    Takes place during the Clan Wars Era and describes the formation of the Senju clan and the Leaf village.

    I'd read all the way to the last chapter ASAP if I were you because a lot of people are about to get their shit wrecked.


    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10500180/1/Kusari-no-Naruto

    A result of the author trying to make Naruto like Garra but with Kushina's chakra chains instead of sand. Don't worry though he's not OP, ANBU still kick his ass. Which is why said ANBU try to get him to join them in an attempt by Hiruzen to get Naruto to start making personal connections.
     
  2. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    I like Kusari, been reading it since the beginning because I liked his other story, but the angst is killing it slowly. The last chapter was better than the previous ones.
     
  3. Gengar

    Gengar Degenerate Shrimp –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    I always hate it when friendship is forced on Naruto.
     
  4. Satan

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    I'd have appreciated the story more if it wasn't fem!Haku. I just can't take his character seriously when he's not a boy.
     
  5. golan

    golan Temporarily Banhammered DLP Supporter

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    Really? Why not?
     
  6. Satan

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    When people genderbend him for pairing purposes his character loses the edge that it had, and he turns into doormat. Almost like Hinata. Read Kusari and you'll see. I'd copy-paste from FFN but I can't highlight the text.
     
  7. golan

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    Well, only in bad fanfiction. Having a vagina instead of a penis doesn't make this character worse, only, if the writer writes him that way.
    Don't have many stories Hinata grow some guts?
     
  8. Satan

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  9. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Haku isn't a "doormat" in Kusari because she's a chick, she's currently extremely fucked in the head. Her one reason for living was killed in front of her, therefore she doesn't even want to live. It's not even subtle.
     
  10. Gengar

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    I remember a crackfic called something like 'Suddenly, Ninjas' where Hinata was the pampered mafia princess, Naruto is already mine (silly), kill them with a smile, yamato nadeshiko type.

    Probably my fav Naruto character ever, let alone FF character or just fav Hinata.
     
  11. Satan

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    To me it just seems like the author made her that way for fan-service sake.


    I'm reading this now, it's really good. If there was an opposite of a bashfic it'd be this.
     
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  12. Trooper

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    Can one of the Mods please move this thread to the main Other Fandoms forum or somewhere a little more accessible?
     
  13. Nemrut

    Nemrut The Black Mage ~ Prestige ~

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    Reread suddenly ninjas last night and yeah, it was a blast. Really loved the friendship between Sasuke and Naruto where they genuinely liked each other, without any stupid rivalry bogging things down, just two friends supporting what the other does and working together when things call for it.

    If there was something like a rivalry, it was the two trying to out-awesome each other but I'm hesitant to call that a rivalry since they didn't begrudge or deny the others accomplishments and instead celebrated it.

    The alternative takes on Sakura and Hinata were great as well, as was the situation in Konoha in general.

    Have to be honest, if a story were take a lot of elements of this story and worked it into a more serious story, that would be pretty awesome.
     
  14. Hero of Stupidity

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    Link, summary?
     
  15. Knyght

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    And then suddenly, Ninjas!
    On the day Naruto Uzumaki was born, the Third Hokage made a decision that would one day turn the world upon its head. Twelve years after the Fourth Hokage killed the Nine-Tailed Fox, Naruto Uzumaki sets forth to become the greatest Ninja of all time!
     
  16. Hero of Stupidity

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    Okey, Inari runnig to Gato is new for me. This is the first time I saw that. I'm pleased with your sacrifice. Give me more.
     
  17. Gengar

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    It's remarkably unhelpful. It's a crack bromance, all you really need to know imo.
     
  18. kinetique

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    That's more of a blurb then a summary, don't you think?
     
  19. TheWiseTomato

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    That's literally the summary on the story, dude. If you want to know more about it, try clicking on the link.
     
  20. Hero of Stupidity

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    So new Naruto ff pet peeve: Introducing OC villains who according to the AN are going to be super important. What the fuck man? Naruverse doesn't have enough villains or what? Naruto can't take two steps without running into them even if you don't count the OVAs or the filler arcs... for fuck sake.


    Someone could recc me some lighthearted non angst fest fic with a probably competent Naruto?
     
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