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Quality Naruto fics

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Inert, Feb 17, 2012.

  1. kinetique

    kinetique Headmaster

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    Is Five Kingdoms for the Dead another Sakura centric story that features the god awful "Celestial voice" shit? I understand wanting to make Sakura a more prominent part of the story, but deciding she needs a power up that literally makes her the embodiment of Deus ex Machina seems a little wonky.
     
  2. meev

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    It's not a recent thing. At all. Not to mention the market for otome stuff is not fujoshi.
     
  3. Feoffic

    Feoffic Alchemist DLP Supporter

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    I didn't say anything about it being recent. Reverse-harem shows have been around almost as long as regular harem shows. There's just more of them now because, as i said, market shifts.

    And otome and fujoshi are basically the same market; sure, there is a difference, but at the end of the day they're similar enough that the difference doesn't really matter.
     
  4. Mercenary

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    Hmm like you I saw that naruto/HP category and nope'd on out of there but i guess I should give it a shot.

    Not... really? I think that was a Time Braid thing and while 5K(Five Kingdoms fuck writing that title over and over again) is along the same type of writing style. Ie. Its a bit surrealist at times.

    Basically iirc, it takes the whole "lol Inner Sakura" and turns into this weird 5 split personality based on all the quote unquote Big Bads of the Naruto series, off the top of my head: Orochimaru, Danzo, Madara. All stuck in her head or at least a warped version of them.

    Mind you, it got... Weird. With a capital W at the end.

    Like Head!Madara was actually real and something about souls and finding him in the next life what?

    If you've got nothing else to read and some time to kill I'd say give it a shot. If not, then I would pass on it.
     
  5. meev

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    I don't think you understand what rotten girls are.

    There are more shounen battle manga that are popular because of fujoshi. Manga and anime that have a female protagonist with multiple hot guys vying for her affections are popular (and have been popular for fucking ever) because of ordinary girls. Not girls who literally only care about yaoi pairings, regardless of what manga the characters are from, or even what the actual personality of those characters is.

    That's like saying male harem manga are popular because of lolicons. I mean, I guess there would be some reading it sure, but that's a pretty out there statement that's essentially fucking bullshit.
     
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  6. Feoffic

    Feoffic Alchemist DLP Supporter

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    You're splitting hairs. Are there differences? Yes, but, again, they are minor enough that they don't matter.

    It's not like we're comparing apples and oranges here, but two different kinds of apples. Sure, they aren't exactly the same, but at the end of the day they're both fucking apples.
     
  7. meev

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    No they're literally not the same at all. Fujoshi are rotten girls. They're girls obsessed with yaoi. That's it. Stuff like otome games and shoujo manga with multiple male love interests sells to women in general.

    You're essentially saying Fifty Shades of Gray sold well because of people obsessed with gay porn.
     
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  8. Agayek

    Agayek Dimensional Trunk DLP Supporter

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    You mean it didn't? :confused:
     
  9. Peter North

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    I'm starting to think that people here have a very different opinion of gay porn than I do.
     
  10. meev

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    Not unless a man and a woman having sex suddenly became classified as gay when I wasn't looking.
     
  11. Peter North

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    Maybe they meant "gay" as in happy. So... "Happy Porn."
     
  12. Feoffic

    Feoffic Alchemist DLP Supporter

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    Now you're just being an insufferable pedant.
     
  13. CrackedMind

    CrackedMind Minister of Magic

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    Why is this conversation even happening in here?

    Because I don't want to contribute, in anyway, to the string of useless posts in here: Unto the Breach updated.
     
  14. Hero of Stupidity

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    Has anyone got a divergence fic, where Naruto decides that he is not ready to be chuunin so he doesn't go?
     
  15. Ash'Ura

    Ash'Ura Totally Sirius

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    Ugh, I tried my best, but I couldn't finish the whole chapter. It was so cheesy. I got to to the point where Naruto called Jairaya "Raiya". Nothing makes me hit [X] faster than an author using a stupid and sappy nickname in a shitty attempt to convey how close two characters are.
     
  16. CrackedMind

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    It was definitely a... drop, in terms of quality. It just feels like it had a lot of potential to go into interesting directions, but this last chapter circled it back to all the cliches I don't like in timetravel stories.
     
  17. Zoldyck

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    good fanfic

    Ya !

    I just registered yesterday because I've seen that this thread was about quality naruto fanfic so I have a request
    Do you know a good fanfic that contains at least two of those criteria:

    - evil naruto
    - "assassin-like" naruto, an example of what I'm looking for is a Naruto that has the same feats as Killua at the beginning of the Hunter exam ( I think we can call this a super naruto because it's around jounin level )
    - evil kyuubi who manipulates/tortures/makes a "nasty" deal with Naruto
    - a demon world like the Makai from YYH
    - naruto has abilities that look like Hiei jagan/dotdf from YYH again
    - smart/manipulative naruto
    - cold naruto
    - no pairings

    Sorry for my bad english I'm a french teenager
     
  18. Baradine

    Baradine Seventh Year

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    BTT Viol̀e͜n̛t͝ D̶e͡li͡g҉h̛t҉s̀ ~ Prestige ~

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    How evil are we talking exactly? Cold and/or selfish, or puppykicking evil?
    Because People Lie by Nugar fits the first pretty well, and satisfies a bunch of your other conditions.
    Sadly, it's abandoned, and has been for a while.
    It is NaruHina, though, but much less saccharine than it usually is. Also a minor crossover with Lovecraft.
     
  20. Zoldyck

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    arf naruhina is the pairing I hate the most :/
    both of those kind of evil are good for me but it's more like he wants to destroy konoha or some shit like that and he doesn't hesitate to do nasty things like betrayal or manipulation to accomplish his goal


    thanks baradine I think I have read a bit of it a while ago but I stopped I don't remember why, I'll reread that !
     
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