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Quality Naruto fics

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Inert, Feb 17, 2012.

  1. Peter North

    Peter North Dark Lord

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    I'm pretty sure he abandoned that fic. Also I tried that particular fic and lost a lot of interest in it with older Naruto.
     
  2. SeekingSerenity

    SeekingSerenity Third Year

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    Well, I didn't say it was actually good.
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5166693/1/Scorpion-s-Disciple
    As far as my knowledge goes, this is the only one that's above decent.
     
  3. Ven Arima

    Ven Arima Slug Club Member

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    Plucking strings wasn't too very good, but the way the story was unfolding before he abandoned it would have made it an interesting AU of somewhat bearable quality which, considering the state of the fandom at the moment, is a welcome sight.
     
  4. NTD

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    Chance for a Prophecy is alright but despite English not being their first language (and all the problems that go with that) you can easily feel the smugness the author gives off from using the most over used plot twist in media.

    [IMGUR]EQRnxjr[/IMGUR]
    or genjutsu this time

    Despite that, there is apparently only two more chapters to go and the story was at least compelling and the authors note seems to imply that there's more than we know regarding the spoiler.

    Definitely not the best time travel fic ever. I'd say 2/5

    If I was going to rec a time travel story I'd go with

    Fuinjutsu
    Which is already in the library with 5 stars

    For puppeteer Naruto, Peter is right that most are pretty bad and worse if you have high standards.

    I did find this one readable for me Scorpion's Disciple

    Edit: oh someone else dropped Scorpion's disciple and it's in the library with 4 stars
     
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  5. douter

    douter Sixth Year

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    A couple of good stories that are unfortunately dead:

    The Girl From Whirlpool by SilverShine (248K words)
    A Minato/Kushina fic that details their lives growing up as well as becoming legends.

    In the Breaking by nyet khan (46k words)
    Naruto losing his mind after the extraction of the Kyuubi, and then starts an orphanage in Mist.

    Medicinal Lullaby by Shivakashi (259K words)
    Naruto has a kid story.
     
  6. The Berkeley Hunt

    The Berkeley Hunt Headmaster

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    In the breaking was really good, I remember getting really into that waay back in the day.
     
  7. UVgamma

    UVgamma Squib

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    Something about in the breaking appeals to me a lot. I reread this several times a year every year, hoping the author returns from a decade long hiatus.
     
  8. Zoldyck

    Zoldyck Squib

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    Do you know a fanfic where Naruto is a sociopath? kinda like Johan from Monster
     
  9. Sequoia

    Sequoia Second Year

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    For those who like SI naruto fics, I found two I think are entertaining. The latter one is a 7k long one-shot, though.

    Runner

    By CompYES

    An SI who is taken in as one of Danzo's minions and replaces Rin on kakashi's team seven. From the feel of how things are going with it, it reaching it's end soon.

    Cold Waters

    By Erimies

    This SI is a Hyuuga born outside the clan. I wish the author had expanded a little more on this story, but I still like it.
     
  10. fire

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    I've been reading Shinobi Team 7, and it's fucking awesome. Haven't been this excited by a Naruto fic for a very long time - I'm very impressed with its ambitious worldbuilding. It's really too bad that it's like 3 years old, with only 120k words (that's basically 3k~ words per month).
     
  11. VanRopen

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    Yep, I enjoy it a lot - even if nothing else, that sort of novelty is really nice. Has a library thread:
    https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=28112
     
  12. fire

    fire Order Member

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    A lot of people in there disliking it just because of Sakura's relative prominence. It's quite silly really.
     
  13. Hw597

    Hw597 Seventh Year

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    @ Zoldyuck
    Try Daystar Clarions fics
     
  14. mortalone

    mortalone Sixth Year

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  15. Ven Arima

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    I'd say that the Naruto in Naruto: Altered History and Naruto: Shinobi Wars fits the bill incredibly well. More so the Naruto in the latter, since it's the events in Altered History that set it all up.

    Anyways, here's a link: HERE

    Unless you're looking for a story where he's just kind of going around killing people just to kill them, no reason plot wise or character wise. If that's the case, I've got nothing.
     
  16. fire

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    Out of curiosity, which fic would you guys recommend that's most like Gallyrat's Shinobi: Team 7? I'm on a Naruto roll since reading it, but nothing really compares. I'm thinking of this very different AU, with unique worldbuilding and the like.

    The only stories that I can recall, being similarly different, are Shadow Rebirth's Worth Dying For and Howdy's Houses of the Holy - but the former is dead, and the latter is deader than dead ever since Howdy went into the Playhouse and never came out.
     
  17. Sequoia

    Sequoia Second Year

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    I haven't read Shinobi: Team 7 so I can't help you there Fire.

    But, for those who don't mind "Sakura-centric" stuff I think Expedient by SwiftKick is a fairly good read.

    Basically Konoha and Iwagakure are doing this genin exchange program, and Sakura happens to be most "non-liability" student to send over. Her teacher ends up being Deidara sometime before he defects.

    I can't remember why I stop reading, but now it's complete and I thought I'd share for anyone who's interested.

    And for Naruto/HP crossover there's Vixen-Tail's All Your Bases Are Belong To Us

    It's a Time-Travel fic that's Herimone and Kakashi centric as far as I can see.

    Hasn't been updated in over a year. Mostly, because this author is working on another epic-length SI fic in the khr section, and she say's she has to work out the plot kinks that come with this particular type of crossover.
    Hope she gets back to it sometime this year. I'm curious of where this will go.
     
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  18. Ven Arima

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    As far as engaging and worthwhile AU's go, the ones that come to mind immediately are gold straight from authors here on DLP. I'm sure there are other on here who have more suggestions but here:

    Naruto: Altered History by Geor-sama (Old...)

    Naruto: Shinobi Wars by Geor-sama (...but gold)

    Hurricane Suite by Inert

    Life in Konoha's ANBU by Shezza (Pure gold! I can't think of a better and more engaging suggestion. But if you think Shinobi: Team 7 spoiled you, then that's childs play in comparison to what this'll do. Actually, all of these will spoil you rotten.)

    Written in Reverse by Menace (It's so damn good! Warning, if you don't like the idea of a Fem!Sasuke then prepare to either not read it or be converted because she's amazing!)

    Radiant Nights by Menace (There's so little of it but it's beyond amazing!)

    The Howling Wind by Menace(Epic)

    Patriot's Dawn by Inert(Badass)

    Plus the only non-DLP authored work, just because I have a special place for this story in my heart:

    Naruto: Potential Realised by Iron Monkey Fist

    Oh and, I suppose I should toss this one out. It's old and whether it's held up is debatable but I recall this being a pleasant read.

    The Nine Broken Mirrors by Ayien
     
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  19. oakes

    oakes Unspeakable DLP Supporter

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    I just can't get my mind around genin exchange thing. It's just wrong.
     
  20. Agent

    Agent High Inquisitor DLP Supporter

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    And the fact that it's between Konoha and Iwa. Suna, I can maybe see, but Iwa?
     
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