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Altered Destiny by CandyAngel17 - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by ShadowedDarkness, Jan 25, 2006.

  1. ShadowedDarkness

    ShadowedDarkness Second Year

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    Title: Altered Destiny
    Author: CandyAngell17
    Rating: T
    Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance
    Pairing: Harry/Fleur
    Status: WIP
    Summary: Harry Potter is taken his first day at Privet Drive and is believed to be dead by the wizarding world.After 15 years of training with different creatures and clans he returns to continue his education at Hogwarts where a tournament is taking place.

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2745016/1/
     
  2. DarkPhoenix2500

    DarkPhoenix2500 Second Year

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    Aye i was reading this one, was gonna wait till he goes to hogwarts and see what the author does though, so far its prety good i must say, the latest chapter was kinda cool with the street fighting >_> but yea, thats my idea.....i need to go to sleep...
     
  3. ShadowedDarkness

    ShadowedDarkness Second Year

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    Well I highly doubt it will be friends with ron and hermione, twins I could see if they are still there. Street fighting scene was nice, just wondering who exactly he saved... or if that is unimportant.
     
  4. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Golden Patronus Admin

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    Like this story if it keeps up the good work.
     
  5. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Good story. Has a lot of potential, even with the timing all screwed up (the tournament is misplaced in 5th year). Also, those female twins are a bit overused and not as interesting as they were meant to be. But other than that, I liked it a lot.
     
  6. I found this really good. I love non-human Harry - and vampires are cool, well, to me anyway.
     
  7. darklordmike

    darklordmike Auror

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    This is 37k words of abandoned, unreadable fangirl crap.

    Harry is taken by a clan of vampires and raised as their own, which gives the author an excuse to introduce a host of teenage OCs that belong in a Hannah Montana episode. There's Liam and Luke, Anastasia, Harry's 'uncle' Kylen Eagle, and countless others. And they all seem to have black panther or nundu animagus forms.

    Excuse me while I vomit. There...that's better.

    Here's part of the author's abandonment note:

    On the list of things wrong with this story, the lack of conflict doesn't make the top ten.

    0/5
     
  8. The Greek

    The Greek Second Year

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    Pretty much this ^. I really think it needs to get out of the library. Fast. 0/5
     
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