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Abandoned Cat by DuchessOfDementia - M - ASoIaF

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by The Fine Balance, Mar 11, 2013.

  1. The Fine Balance

    The Fine Balance Headmaster

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    Title: Cat
    Author: DuchessOfDementia
    Rating: M
    Words: 13.5k
    Fandom: Song of Ice and Fire (Book 5 spoilers)
    Pairing: None, really. Though the author had one planned.
    Summary: She was not Arya any more; she was Cat, the greatest duellist in Braavos. But he was still Gendry. That had not changed.

    Rating: 4/5
    Link: Cat

    It's short, abandoned, and half of it is composed of Arya and Gendry bickering. And yet, for the glimpse of Braavos it gives, for the life of Cata di Canale that it outlines, I love it. While I wish that book Arya would find a life similar to what this Arya does, I know that the tragic story arc that is undoubtedly meant for the best Stark is probably just beginning.

    This is a what-if sort of fic, and rather beautiful for it. The short outlines it gives of Braavos are masterfully done, and the city truly seems alive even with the sparse word count. It doesn't really get anywhere, but it makes you wish that somebody would write more of this sort of stuff.
     
    Last edited: Mar 11, 2013
  2. Lamora

    Lamora Definitely Not Batman ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Gendry comes off as extremely rape-y in this fic. Love the Braavos shit, though. 3/5.
     
  3. purple

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    I really enjoyed everything in that story, except for Gendry. 3/5
     
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    This fic is good, shame it was abandoned. Also, I agree - Gendry comes off as a creepy, obsessive, stalker-kind-of-guy and a real douche.

    But still, this fic is good, so 4/5,
     
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