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Abandoned Contemplating Clouds by Tehan - T

Discussion in 'Romance' started by Marie M, Nov 5, 2007.

4.4743590354919/5, 78 votes
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  1. Marie M

    Marie M Raptured to Hell

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    Nov 5, 2007 #1
    Title: Contemplating Clouds
    Author: Tehan
    Rating: T
    Genre: Romance/Humor
    DLP Category: Romance
    Pairing: Harry/Luna
    Chapters: 5
    Words: 8,222
    Updated: Jan. 5, 2010
    Published: Oct. 28, 2007
    Status: Abandoned
    Summary: Apathetic Occlumency teacher twisting your mind out of shape? Never fear, there's a charming young girl in the year below to twist it back in the opposite direction. Just hope it doesn't snap.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3862145/1/Contemplating_Clouds
    Link: WbA thread: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=7517

    There are no doubts, it's definitely worthy of DLP library.
    5/5


    Checked by Minion, Nov. 18, 2012
    Added WbA link.
    Checked By Sorrows: 03/08/2019
     
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  2. Lincos

    Lincos Professor DLP Supporter

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    Nov 5, 2007 #2
    Yeah, no dout. 5/5 DLP goodness.
     
  3. Kenshkrix

    Kenshkrix DA Member DLP Supporter

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    Nov 5, 2007 #3
    5/5, very entertaining.
     
  4. TripticWriter

    TripticWriter Groundskeeper

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    Nov 5, 2007 #4
    Man, my gauge of total fluffyness and pure awesomeness just completely sky-rocked.

    It's an Light, Unequaled, Nice and completely Atypical read. In short it's the perfect L.U.N.A's story. ^^
     
  5. HSRTG

    HSRTG First Year

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    Nov 5, 2007 #5
    Original, un-clichéd, inventive. Grammar and spelling are good. Plus, it's entertaining! 5/5
     
  6. Jamven

    Jamven Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    Nov 5, 2007 #6
    I like it, I love it, and I want some more of it. 5/5
     
  7. Garret P.I.

    Garret P.I. Backtraced

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    Nov 5, 2007 #7
    I little fluffy for DLP... but I'll give it a 4.5/5. You can't help but like a good Harry/Luna fic.

    Very original as well. I liked the umbrella skimmer... very strange and chaos causing.
     
  8. Solomon

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    Nov 5, 2007 #8
    Normally, this isn't my type of fic. Somehow, Tehan made me love it anyways. Well done, Tehan, well done.

    4.5/5 (It's too short to garner a 5/5 at the moment)
     
  9. LogrusMage

    LogrusMage Supreme Mugwump

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    Nov 6, 2007 #9
    A bit fluffy, but it's in-character Luna fluff, a tremendous feat for any fanfic author.

    This fic is so full of not OOC win it's crazy....

    5/5
     
  10. Eladi

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    Nov 6, 2007 #10
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    5\5
     
  11. Subcomandante_Taco

    Subcomandante_Taco Seventh Year

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    Nov 6, 2007 #11
    It's awesome so far, and while the chapters are very short, they are satisfying. 4.5/5 so far.

    You should probably correct this though:

    Keep it up.
     
  12. Jearom

    Jearom Sixth Year

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    Nov 6, 2007 #12
    Love this story, I've been following it in WBA. 5/5!
     
  13. Swimdraconian

    Swimdraconian Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Nov 7, 2007 #13
    Quirky and lighthearted, just what the Doc ordered.

    5/5.
     
  14. thapagan

    thapagan High Inquisitor

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    Nov 7, 2007 #14
    First prize for best portrayal of Luna Lovegood.
     
  15. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Nov 7, 2007 #15
    Yeah. That's what impresses me the most about this story. Tehan's portrayal of Luna Lovegood, something a lot of authors totally fuck up, even good authors. She isn't an easy character to write, not by a long shot.

    You make her more human while still keeping her weirdness, which is how she should be. She isn't some emotionless doll that is never surprised, never angry, never sad... she has feelings. She nearly cried on the spot when she found out Dumbledore had been murdered.

    Good work, Tehan.
     
  16. Omagic

    Omagic Fifth Year

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    Nov 7, 2007 #16
    I agree with everyone else. Great writing, fast easy reading, quality Lovegood. Been awhile since I read a fic with the characters still solidy based on canon that was this good.

    4/5...I reserve one for the plot that is still pending development, though fully expected to occur.

    Cheers,

    Omagic
     
  17. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    Nov 7, 2007 #17
    5/5 so long as you keep updating. Even if the updates are small, they're so satisfying.
     
  18. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Nov 7, 2007 #18
    The character portrayal of Luna is about all I can find worth reading in the story. The rest is utter tripe, you bandwagoning cunts! This barely deserves a one out of five! the scene with Cho? Fail! Jetski Umbrellas?! How utterly retarded.

    You have failed your /b/ culture, Tehan. You are now Anti-/b/.


    BTW: Great Job, niglet. 4/5. Maek it longer nao, plox? Longcat demands it.
     
  19. Garret P.I.

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    Nov 8, 2007 #19
    This coming from the person that gave "You're a wizard, Potter" a 4 out of 5.

    A story where Snape quotes the fucking magic schoolbus (how very gay), where Harry turns himself into a fucking girl and goes prancing around Diagon Alley and calls Snape "daddy".

    Vash, you fucking hypocritical scrotum monkey :fap , you got nowhere to criticize on this score.
     
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  20. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Nov 8, 2007 #20
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