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Oneshot Crimson Night by RikodouSennin - M - Naruto

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by X Kronos X8, Feb 26, 2010.

  1. X Kronos X8

    X Kronos X8 Fifth Year

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    Title: Crimson Night
    Author: RikodouSennin
    Fandom: Naruto
    Rating: M
    Pairing: None
    Words: 6,580
    Updated: March 10, 2010
    Published: February 24, 2010
    Status: Complete, Oneshot

    Summary: Dreams... they are well known, sometimes desired and sometimes not, but, in essence, they are harmless. With one exception. For Uzumaki Naruto, dreams shall make the dark night bleed into a crimson, and cry a rain of blood. -Features Realistic!Sandaime-

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5772483/1/Crimson_Night

    I personally like the Sandaime portrayed in this story. As a man willing to do anything for the safety of his village, the ideal Hokage.

    Yes, he may have overreacted a little, but he was dealing with the Jinchurriki for the most powerful bijuu.

    4/5
     
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  2. pdo91

    pdo91 Professor DLP Supporter

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    I like the idea, but I couldn't really get into it. The author went out of his way to make it scary, but didn't pull it off well. Plus, I think the story was too short to fully expand upon the details. It's an interesting snippet, but it just didn't hook me. 3/5 for the effort.
     
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