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WIP Defiance by Dark Lord Slytherin - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Sesc, Jun 30, 2017.

  1. Darthlawyer

    Darthlawyer First Year

    Apr 22, 2016
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    Now at chapter 20 but the story for me seems to try not to be a an over powered Harry does whatever he wants story while being exactly that.
    It uses like many Indy!harry fics wandless magic as a means to make Harry different and more powerful than the rest. Harry meanwhile uses it mostly to show off how badass he is and to pull pranks for which nobody can catch him because he didn't use a wand and nobody can trace wandless magic back to him for some reason.
    Except for the mystery at the start it is a rehash of old cliches.