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Abandoned Dragon Lily By WerewolfWarrior - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Jenko, Feb 9, 2017.

  1. Chadrew

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  2. TheLazyReader

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    Is this completely abandoned? Recently (as in last year) there was a re-upload in ff.net that contains a 20th I didn't remember existing.
     
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    Path to the repost with 20th chapter: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12628886/. This wasn't uploaded by the author but at least in this case the poster isn't trying to take credit for other's work.

    And yes, whoever he was, werewolfwarrior appears to have left behind his fanfiction aspirations.
     
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    Word on the street is that his mother found and read his Harry/Lily incest porn and wasn't too impressed, resulting in him taking down all his fics and disappearing from the fandom.
     
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    Fucking hell, that's horrific.
     
  6. TheLazyReader

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    Wasn't that what happened to Shadman?
     
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    No. The meme goes he's supposed to have gotten in legal trouble because he drew Roblox and they overreacted. Other sources just say his site (which hosts, may I remind you, incredibly strong pornography of an often less-than-wholesome kind) got taken down by its hosts because of its content.
     
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    That's pretty hilarious that his mother apparently found out about it. How do you even have that conversation? "Er, mom, I know I wrote about a son screwing his mother, but it's just a stupid fantasy, it isn't based in reality or — yes, I know you have red hair too —"

    The fic itself was... alright. I didn't think it was great or shitty. But by the point where both Narcissa and Lily find out, I just rooted for Harry breaking it off with both of them. The whole romance thing felt too contrived, to the point where I just got frustrated with Harry for digging himself further into a hole. The whole was bound to be blown wide open eventually it seemed like all three of them knew. I dunno, I found the conflict more frustrating than intriguing.

    Still, great wanking material.
     
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    I quite liked the conflict. The girls fighting for the protagonist is somehow rare to see, as many writes just have all the girls get along or just forget their previous feelings in favor the main girl. I believe conflict is what drives fictional stories, and this fic exceed in that, so kudos. Also, you guys have to remember Harry is fourteen, of course he's gonna dig a grave for himself in that situation. For what it's worth, I went through something similar about the same age, dating two different girls at the same time, and, obviously, ended up with neither.

    WerewolfWarrior also did good with the emotions; the jealousy, anger, and sadness were very real in the story. Characterization was good. He made up Lily and Narcissas' character and stuck to it. Harry and Hermione were also good (despite Hermione being a lesbian for some reason), and Ron I don't really remember. Fleur was not her canon self, but it's the same as with Narcissa and Lily: he made up a character for her and stuck to it.

    On the other hand, everything else was bad. From the lesbian-Hermione subplot to the magical setting and main-plot.

    Overall 3.5/5, just because it tried to be more than what it is: a soap-like romance laced with smut.
     
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    I'm not saying there shouldn't be any conflict. All stories need conflict. It's just that this one... it didn't really work for me.

    I think the fact that he's 14 is what throws me off. It's difficult for me to see a 40 year old milf in love with him, his own mother too, and also an unnaturally beautiful veela being interested in him. I could get behind Narcissa wanting a boy toy to fuck, but when it became much more than simple sex, it throws me off. Idk, I know I'm not supposed to take a Harry/Narcissa/Lily/Fleur pairing so seriously, but it feels like the author wants me to.
     
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    Well, yeah, you gotta suspended your disbelief a little here. In fact, you gotta do it for most of canon Harry's romances. Let's face it, Harry is not an 'alpha male' in canon, he's your usual introverted guy who needs a little 'get to know' first before he becomes attractive.

    Anyway, my point is: you have to know what you're getting yourself into when you click a story tagged Harry/Narcissa/Lily.
     
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    "Unfortunately, Dragon Lily had to be put down; I've already given the rights to another author, though I don't know if she's doing anything with it right now. Anyway, don't think I'll be revisiting it."
    Dragon Lily had to be put down...
    Oh shit, Taure is right isn't he? What the actual fuck
    Although it seems the person who posted the 20th chapter is the ones who picked up the story. It hasn't been that long so maybe they'll continue it.
     
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    Damn, I had hoped he had either retreated completely from the internet or at the very least killed himself. You just can't win.
     
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    wew lad
    It was just a prank bro.
    --- Post automerged ---
    Took a look at it. WerewolfWarrior made Lily an utter bitch to Harry and all-around terrible person this time. Suble? Not really.
     
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    I don't know about the rest of you but Odran makes my life a bit better.
     
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    Sounds like his oedipus complex was cured at least, so that's something he got out of the experience.

    And people say trashy smutfics don't have character development.
     
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    I love the italics for emphasis in this story.

    Especially when you're looking for the pwp part.
    The dirty talk is funny as fuark.

    If you remove the porn and the milf-porn-inspired-ideas all that shit about the Nexus is cool, man. The only other decent story about the end of magic (HP/FD) is ok but not as detailed.
     
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    There is a link to the ficsite copy - I have it open in another tab in my browser.

    What I find odd is that the story is getting pounded because it doesn't fit "canon" events - **NEWSFLASH** - most fanfiction does not.
    In the case of Lucius/Narcissa, how much do we know (from canon) about their relationship? Next to nit. The reason we know next to nit is easily explained - lack of data. Why Lily (and Harry) are the way they are is, in fact, explained in the story itself - the spell Lily used to protect Harry had unforeseen effects on BOTH Harry AND Lily. Is it socially OR societally acceptable? No - which they are both aware of. Are the two, in fact, trying to RESIST the social AND societal problems what happened to them are causing? Yes.

    In the case of Narcissa, she has been asked (by her husband) to do an Elaine Robinson ("The Graduate") on the son of a close friend. We have no data on what their marriage (Lucius and Narcissa, that is) is really like except the following:

    1. It was a traditional wizarding marriage (contract - not necessarily love)
    2. Narcissa was NOT the original planned bride - Andromeda was. Andromeda eloped with Theodore (Ted) Tonks the Muggleborn Ravenclaw - upsetting the Walburga applecart. Both are canon - from no less than Sirius Black ("Order of the Phoenix").

    Since we don't know what the Lucius/Narcissa marriage was really like, anything is possible. (In Chapter Three, it is coming out that Harry is developing an attraction to Narcissa. Of course he is - he's not dead; he also is not a pouf. This is something that Lucius was, in fact, counting on.
    Later in the chapter, details of Lucius' machinations start coming out. Problematical - including for Narcissa; remember, she was BORN a Black - and this is her BIRTH family that Lucius is looking to screw over. Could Harry inherit from Sirius? Yes - it would not be the first time that a nondirect relation inherited - and Harry and Sirius ARE related, much to Lucius' consternation - Dorea Potter nee Black - Harry's grandmother. Worse, Sirius DESPISES Lucius - canon and known.

    From the last Narcissa post, it looks VERY much that her marriage to Lucius has a fork through it (she is referring to herself as Narcissa BLACK at the the near-end of Chapter 19) - and she sees both Hermione AND Lily as competitors for Harry (where I am curious is do Hermione and Lily see EACH OTHER as competitors).
     
  20. TheLazyReader

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    I think they see everyone as competitors, being so deliciously possessive of Harry. Also, I agree with you, the romance is not nearly as contrived as people say. The incest and age-difference irk people off, but the romance itself has an explanation.

    I think Mahimboy is the one who adopted the fic and they have uploaded the 20th chapter. The quality didn't drop too much. If they're gonna continue is anyone's guess.
     
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