Abandoned Fate/eternia by Surarrin - M - Naruto / Fate/Stay Night

Discussion in 'Fate/Stay Night' started by Jon, Mar 2, 2010.

  1. Poytin

    Poytin The Arby's Hipster DLP Supporter

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    You have to put it out within a couple of days or you're a cock-tease.
     
  2. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    zomg you updated <3

    I was kind of hoping that the UBW movie and the new Fate game for the PSP might spark some interest for people to update their Fate stories.
     
  3. DrSarcasm

    DrSarcasm Unspeakable

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    It's wonderful to see you updating again. I've been needing my FSN fix.

    I'm quite enjoying the show-don't-tell method of writing I've been picking up. Maybe it's just been a string of bad writers, but it's only recently that I've been coming across authors who use said method.

    Though something has been bugging me though: It's obvious that at the very least the last few years of Naruto's mortal life were AU by the intro, but at what point does the divergence occur? Did he actually obtain Kusanagi while alive, or is his 'legend' the sum of the events of his life, much like Dark Syao's Fictional!Harry?

    I quite liked Rider's new 'mount' from the hardware store. I swear I've seen that image somewhere, but I can't quite remember where.
     
  4. Jarik

    Jarik Chief Warlock

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    Was ecstatic to see this updated. This is one of my favorite FSN crossovers and has one of the best characterisations of Naruto I've found. =)
     
  5. tragicmat1

    tragicmat1 Death Eater

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    Wow, I had completely forgotten about this story till now :p Love the update too
     
  6. Legacy

    Legacy Unspeakable DLP Supporter

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    I'm incredibly confused by this update everyone is talking about. I'm looking at the chapter listings now on it and it is still saying last update is 2010.

    Edit: Nevermind.
     
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    tragicmat1 Death Eater

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  8. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Not sure if I ever told you guys, but the reason I stopped writing this story was because I lost the usb with all my plot information on it. Kinda killed any interest I had in writing it at the time. Here we are two years later and I've managed to regain enough interest that I managed to piece together this much from the various people I had shown it to as well as bits and pieces of recovered info.

    If you have any questions feel free to ask and I'll answer if I feel that it isn't going to ruin or spoil parts of the story.
     
  9. Fenraellis

    Fenraellis Minister of Magic

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    While not a direct quote perhaps, I cracked up, immediately thinking of Firefly.:)
     
  10. goldenwolfeye

    goldenwolfeye Seventh Year

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    When I saw the new chapter up, I had to go back and reread the entire story, and once again, I loved it.

    You, Jon, have really done a great job in catching the 'feel' the visual novel. As a fan of all things Nasuverse, who has been starved of late, thank you. I'm really looking forward to where you take things from here. Your story has captured my imagination in a way that few stories, fanfiction or otherwise, have managed to accomplish.

    What are the rest of Naruto's Noble Phantasms? Are they his techniques? If that's the case, how will you handle them in a way that isn't game-breaking? Are there going to be changes to the way the techniques work, similar to the changes to Shadow Clone? Will Naruto's connection with the wind have an impact on his eventual meeting and conflict with Saber? And how the hell do the Brunestud's and Type-Moon fit into the plot (A connection with the ten-tailed beast)?

    I don't expect (or even want, really) a post answering my stream of conscience style questions. I just want you to know that there are people who enjoy your storytelling enough to think about what you write. Even when they aren't sitting in front of their computer.

    tl;dr: Thank you for what you've written, thank you for what you're going to write, and I, along with every other reader, am eager to see where you take us.
     
  11. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    1. Naruto has 4 Noble Phantasms.
    2. That won't have an impact on his meeting or how he interacts with Saber.
    3. Brunestud and co fit into the sequel. ;)
     
  12. I Burn Water

    I Burn Water Seventh Year

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    THERE'S A FUCKING SEQUEL?!

    I'd better go ahead and check into a hospital, because there is no way this erection is going to go away in just four hours.

    This is my favorite characterization of Naruto, bar none.
     
  13. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    There is.

    It has Arcueid and Aoko Aozaki in it, amongst other awesome characters.
     
  14. TSN

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    dude you rock.
     
  15. goldenwolfeye

    goldenwolfeye Seventh Year

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    First off, sequel? Dude, just made my day.

    Second, Naruto having four Noble Phantasms is interesting. I suppose we've already seen two, or three in action. The necklace for one, and two or three depending on if his ability to manifest weapons from his time is combined or separate from his ability to use techniques. I assume that the Kyubi will be involved in an NP in some way shape or form. If Gamabunta shows up has a phantasmal beast Noble Phantasm I'll lose it.

    Speaking of sequels, The fact that there is a sequel beyond the events of the Holy Grail war imply that Naruto exists in the world beyond the destruction of the Grail. There are only a few ways to accomplish this....

    NaruSaku go go go!

    Edit: Also, would it be to much to ask for a servant stat sheet? Maybe one that continually updates as we learn more about Assassin?
     
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  16. Jon

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    I do have one somewhere, but I'd have to edit it based on how much you guys are aware of.
     
  17. Clerith

    Clerith Supreme Mugwump DLP Supporter

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    Well, it was average at best.

    Lmao, I fucking read that update some days ago, and I had NO FUCKING IDEA what I was reading. I didn't even make the connection with your story >_> I dunno how I managed to miss that. Now it makes sense.

    To be honest, I'm just wanting more, now. I mean, the ramen part was funny, and the chase was exciting, but... more. Just need more to really grasp the fact that you're actually updating again. It was pretty jarring, but probably because I didn't re-read the story... yet :p

    Anyways, sequel, huh? Aoko and Arcueid are pretty awesome, yeah. Say, is it gonna be pre- or post-Tsukihime?

    Cool. Give us the full info once the fic is over, will ya?
     
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  18. Jon

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    It's a third of the chapter. It isn't done yet. Far from it.
     
  19. Wingthesword

    Wingthesword Squib

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    I'm actually more interested in the Gilgamesh and Illya interaction. Especially Gil.
     
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