Title: Flames of Betrayal
Author: marietsy
Rating: M
Category: Drama/Action/Adventure
Chapters: 36
Words: 200,869
Updated: March 23, 2007
Published: January 9, 2006
Status: Abandoned
Summery: AU Harry was sent to Azkaban and was later found to be innocent. With the help of Ron, he will find out who his true friends are. Will he forgive those who betrayed him? Will he be able to let the world know what kind of man Dumbledore really are?
Link: http://www.geocities.com/marietsy/fiction/incompletedstories/index.html
Link: www.fanfiction.net/s/2745164/1/Flames-of-Betrayal

A rather enjoyable story with an interesting plot. The only thing I don’t like is that Harry and co might be a little too emotional but otherwise very good.


Checked by Minion, Dec. 6, 2012
Dead link is dead, ff.net link isn't.

 

its a touch too sappy at time, but for the most part it's decent, compared to some of the author's other fics

 

I didnt like it because i hate ron.

 

I dislike ron, but i do like the story.... its funny at times....

 

I hate ron normally, but at least here he's decent, not a jealous prick.

What kills it for me is the utterly evil Dumbledore

 

I haven’t read any stories there Dumbledore is this kind of evil before so I thought its quite interesting.

I didn’t read all chapters that were posted before posting the link here and now I am starting to dislike the story. The plot and all is good but they act like an extremely emotional girl watching the tragedy of Romeo and Juliet and its staring to get on my nerves. They have started to cry in every chapter and its getting hard to ignore.

 

Yeah i got to agree.. it does put an interesting angle on it... though it could be loads better if there wasnt so much crying... it gets back to the crybabybitch-turningtobadass-backtocrybabybitch!potter... though now theyre got ron along for the ride..

 

i think i like Dobby the best, and the fact that this is the only story where I could stand Ron at all.


I've had it marked in my bookmarks (see threaD) since he/she posted it, it does have its up, but its got alot of annoying stuff too

 

It's beeen updated.

 

Post

I think this fiction is terrific. the headmaster is a evil man.

 

It seems marietsy's account was deleted :cry:

 

OK. You can find his/her stories (I am not quite sure) at:

http://www.geocities.com/marietsy/fiction/incompletedstories/index.html

 

Started off good.

Went downhill...

Got to the point where I couldn't read it anymore.

 

um.....the link doesn't work and i can't seem to find the fic anymore.....

 

http://www.geocities.com/marietsy/fiction/incompletedstories/index.html

it's like 3 posts above yours, the story was taken down off FF.net

 

...oh. ok then, thanks lol

 

Np. I edited the original post so that dead linkage wouldn't happen again, sorry it wasn't done beforehand.