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Oneshot Ground Hog Day by Rorschach's Blot - T - One Shot - Harry/Luna

Discussion in 'Humor' started by liath, Nov 17, 2006.

4.2272725105286/5, 22 votes
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  1. liath

    liath Seventh Year

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    Nov 17, 2006 #1
    Title: Ground Hog Day
    Author: Rorschach's Blot
    Rating: T
    Genre: Humor/Parody
    Pairing: Harry/Luna
    Words: 8,464
    Published: Nov. 17, 2006
    Status: One Shot
    Summary: Harry lives the same day over and over again.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3248583/1/

    A very fascinating, but rushed one shot. There are a few funny parts--solid grammar and punctuation.

    Overall, I give it 4/5.


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  2. PsyckoSama

    PsyckoSama Groundskeeper

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    Nov 17, 2006 #2
    Beat me... damned.

    5/5 for the Luna romance ;)
     
  3. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nov 17, 2006 #3
    As I said to Rorsch in his group; For Massive Damage.
     
  4. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Nov 17, 2006 #4
    Neat, if a bit pointless.
    3.5/5
     
  5. the-caitiff

    the-caitiff Death Eater

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    Nov 17, 2006 #5
    It's Harry/Luna and it doesn't suck eggs. To often Luna becomes one dimensional, here she's odd and horny, but not too blah. 4/5
     
  6. Tsukiyomi-chan

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    Nov 17, 2006 #6
    Very nice. Good way to stay sane too. Definitely worth a read

    5/5
     
  7. magyareagle

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    Nov 17, 2006 #7
    Luna is definately in character here. Rorsch should do more stories like this and work less on the MAW sequal. Loved how Luna was portrayed, and her logic is very Luna'tic. I agree with caitiff, odd and horny is an apt description of Luna.
     
  8. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Nov 18, 2006 #8
    Pointless but amusing. Ill give it a 4/5. Luna's character wasn't that bad, though i really don't see her going "Hey, wanna shag?"

    Good though.
     
  9. Dark Syaoran

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    Nov 18, 2006 #9
    Even though it was pretty pointless, it was a fun little read. Well done.
     
  10. Hadoren

    Hadoren High Inquisitor

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    Nov 18, 2006 #10
    Best part: How many days it takes Harry before he finally manages to kill Voldemort. It went from six months of training to several decades.
     
  11. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nov 19, 2006 #11
    I'm glad to see a story like this. I had a plot bunny for one of these a long time ago inspired by a Stargate episode....I would have done some things differently, but still pretty good.

    Anyone up for golf off in the Great Hall? =)
     
  12. Xantam

    Xantam Denarii Host

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    Nov 19, 2006 #12
    Are you referring to the episode where both Jack and Teal'c are stuck in a time loop and after a while they both just start doing whatever they want? If so that would be a great read.
     
  13. the-caitiff

    the-caitiff Death Eater

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    That was a good episode.
     
  14. IndoGhost

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    Nov 20, 2006 #14
    Its so stupid...but I give it a 4/5 for making me laugh and read hp after a long while.
     
  15. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Nov 20, 2006 #15
    4/5, casue its brilliantly written. Slightly naff plot, but definitely worth the read.
     
  16. Aekiel

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    Nov 20, 2006 #16
    Funny story, thought it was a bit rushed but I think Rorsch intended that. I give it 4/5.

    The Stargate episode is called Window of Oppurtunity, and its the funniest thing I've ever seen. Come on! Golf through the Stargate :D What more could you want. Love how he started correcting Daniel on the translations after a few loops. :p Its my favourite episode, what can i say?
     
  17. DreamRed

    DreamRed Seventh Year

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    Ha ha, quite brilliant for what it is. 4/5
     
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    Nov 22, 2006 #18
    Lol!

    Cruddy ending, but pretty funny.

    4/5
     
  19. Wasteland

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    Loved it. Felt a little stupid but thought it was nice and funny 4/5
     
  20. pimpostrous

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    lol, not bad. Yes, it did sorta seem rushed, but i guess theres no point in describing the same day over and over again. But yeah... should have at least described some things more thoroughly.
     
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