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Harry Potter and the God of Azkaban by Jdragon - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Vassago, May 14, 2006.

  1. Vassago

    Vassago First Year

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    Title: Harry Potter and the God of Azkaban
    Author: Jdragon
    Genre: Humor/Action/Adventure
    Rating: M
    Pairing: HP/Various

    Sum: Harry Potter goes to Azkaban not because he was framed or turn evil but because he wants to find someone that is there to help him. Rated R for future chapters... Powerful Potter, HPdiffrent characters, No Slash...

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2259128/1/
     
  2. BlueMagikMarker

    BlueMagikMarker Pirate King Yarrgh's First Mate

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    First impression... eh wow this guy's writing gives me a headache. I'll read more of it later... but seriously, "Dog?"
     
  3. Lunarian

    Lunarian Third Year

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    I remember reading this awhile ago. I think I liked some of it, but lost interest very fast and never finished it.
     
  4. Vassago

    Vassago First Year

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    I found it interesting, so I thought I should just share it with you all.

    I laughed myself silly at some of the things he wrote in any case. Well anyway, just read it and make your own choise.
     
  5. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    Oww my brain hurts
     
  6. Void Sorcerer

    Void Sorcerer Groundskeeper

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    This story was extremly retarded. I made it to the 9th chapter before I couldn't get any farther, and I for believe that is an accomplishment.
     
  7. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    Its a different twist I'll give it that. But it just seems so mundane and boring...
     
  8. Dragon Watcher

    Dragon Watcher Third Year

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    Mundane? I can understand calling it boring because that's your opinion but, how is it ordinary?
     
  9. Richard

    Richard Supreme Mugwump

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    Uhh...this story is "okay". I remember reading it about 3 months ago. It's not "as" great as the others, but it's decent.
     
  10. scaryisntit

    scaryisntit Death Eater

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    1/5. This is just awful. I'm sorry, but there's no way this is worthy of being here.

    There's a list of crap here: the writing is appalling in places, though it does improve - slightly; there's intelligent nicknames for Voldemort like "Moldy Butt"; an OC prisoner named "Dog" (why is it so hard for people to come up with a good name? Or at least a name that isn't so goddamn horrible?) who turns out to be some kind of God... I think; massive super!Harry, and in a very bad way (just read the two quotes below); Harry gets a harem because he's so super... it continues.


    Deserves its spot here or less.
     
    Last edited: Sep 4, 2009
  11. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    This is a very dry and unrealistic fic, the writing far from balances out the blatant Super!Harry and the concept sucks. Not to mention the Gary Stu OC.

    1/5
     
    Last edited: Aug 15, 2010
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