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Abandoned Here and Now by KyLewin - T - Naruto

Discussion in 'Naruto' started by FantasyDuck, Feb 6, 2010.

  1. FantasyDuck

    FantasyDuck Second Year

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    Title: Here and Now
    Author: KyLewin
    Fandom: Naruto
    Rating: T
    Pairing: None
    Chapters: 14
    Words: 198,705
    Updated: April 25, 2010
    Published: January 9, 2009
    Summary:
    Sequel to Time and Again. Naruto has gone back in time from a war ravaged future and has a chance to set things right, but despite his efforts things seem to be worse rather than better. Akatsuki, Orochimaru, Danzo... some jinchuriki have no luck at all.
    Link: FF.Net

    Sequel to Time and Again , definitely something that deserves it's own thread. Story continues from where the last part ended and currently stands at 13 chapters and 180k words. A lot can be expected from this fic.

    Unlike the prefix claims, it's not complete but WIP.

    4/5


    Prequel: Time and Time again
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4041754/1/Time_and_Again
    DLP-Thread: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=11587



    Checked: June 7, 2012
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Jun 7, 2012
  2. sincostan

    sincostan High Inquisitor

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    Hasn't this already been posted? It's not bad, but the story lacks direction compared to the prequel, as Naruto's too much of life's bitch. Still I follow this eagerly. 4/5.
     
  3. azrael

    azrael Professor

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    Got much better in the more recent chapters where the big Jinchuuriki battles take place.
     
  4. Murton

    Murton DJ OEM DLP Supporter

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    I'm currently reading the prequel to this story and I do look forward to what the sequel holds. The plot is actually a decent plot once shit starts going wrong.

    4.5/5 towards 5/5 for the prequel.

    Hopefully the same can be said about the sequel.
     
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