Title: Hollow
Author: Kinoth
Rating: M
Genre: General - Reccomended for Independent
Pairing: Harry/Tonks
Chapters: 3
Words: 20,168
Updated: November 29, 2006
Published: November 5, 2004
Status: Abandoned
Summary: What happened to turn the Boy-Who-Lived into this cold, calculating shell? And what can Tonks do to save him? Or can he be saved?
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2122303/1/

This is the only Harry/Tonks fanfic that I've been reading lately. Sadly I havn't looked in a while but most seem to dissapoint me. This hasn't been updated in a while but chapter 3 is already done and it is on TheFanfictionForum at this time.



Checked by Minion, March 10, 2013

 

Could you add a link to the third chapter?

 

i'm interested in a link as well please

 

The link to chapter 3 is http://z14.invisionfree.com/The_Fanfiction_Forum/index.php?showtopic=1005.

 

It shows promise, but I dislike needing to register at yet another forum to read the third piece. The plot is refreshingly new to me at least and the author seems to be using canon magic in interesting ways. I did not expect the wandless expelliarmus to literally try to take his arm off. So apparently some spells can be performed wandless but others cannot.

Despite the slow update pace (years or months between is not my pace) I will give this a tenative 4/5.

 

I agree on all counts - interesting premise, well done Honks, risk of infrequent updates. It's worth the wait, though.

5/5

 

HINT!!!

Bugmenot

 

Yes, but it would be a lot more helpful if it had any working entries.

 

That, would indeed, be a problem.

 

Yeah, I've tried to get passwords for sites that give you completed essays and shit on their before... It didn't work very well seeing as how I haven't gotten any easy marks yet.

This is an alright fic, not outstanding so far by anymeans.

 

I really, really like this. I really, really do.
I really, really, really, really, really, really do.

Cliché soul bonding, but hey - who's perfect anyway?

Mmm... Harry/Tonks. I wish he'd hurry up and post.

4.5 / 5

 

Wow, this is pretty damned good. I'm a little iffy about the soul thing (vague due to spoiler), but the author keeps Harry in character brilliantly, so I've got no problems with this at all.

5/5, can't wait for more. Honks++ ^_^

 

2/5, well written technically, but boring as all get out, and the attempts at "British" humour and "British" accents were awful.

 

Oh, I don't know, I thought the Thatcher crack was funny. And don't you like Crumpet-Horny Snackcakes?

 

I've always liked Kinoth's two HONKS fics (I think the other was Honks, can't remember). But they're so short and the updates are so infrequent. I think both fics are two years old and we're 5 chapters in one and now 3 in the other? I remember Kinoth being one of those who can write angst I enjoy but I need more fic than this to generate much of an opinion on a story (when neither have really gotten to the plot yet).

Great writing. But not enough to be enjoyable to read (for me).

 

Pretty Good story and because its Tonks, it makes it even better. I give it a 4/5.

 

As i am an avid HONKS fan, i cant really say that this story is to bad at all, 3/5, could be better if the guy went about fixing and editing his attempts at british humor, my mate jack of england would be very miffed if he ever read what was contained in that story, still good though

 

It's a nice breath of fresh air after reading "Silently Sobbing" Harry fics for awhile.