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Complete I Am Not A Tragic Figure by Sarah1281 - Dragon Age: Origins

Discussion in 'Games' started by Captain Trips, Jun 12, 2010.

4.5/5, 2 votes
  1. Captain Trips

    Captain Trips High Inquisitor

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    Jun 12, 2010 #1
    Title: I Am Not A Tragic Figure
    Author: Sarah1281
    Rating: T
    Genre: Drama/Humor
    Status: Complete
    Summary: Aunn Aeducan, practical if sheltered exile, knows only two things for certain: if she returns to Orzammar she'll probably end up actually committing fratricide at some point and it's about time to show the world what a dwarven princess can really do...
    Link: I Am Not A Tragic Figure

    I found this fic a few weeks back and found it to be extremly amusing so I decided to recomend it to all of you.

    Checked by Dark Syaoran, June 4, 2014.
    Story now complete.
     
  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Jun 4, 2014 #2
    Some more feedback on this story from people who have read it would be much appreciated.
     
  3. Shouldabeenadog

    Shouldabeenadog Death Eater ⭐

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    Jun 5, 2014 #3
    I'll get started, give me a few days to see what I can.
     
  4. Invictus

    Invictus Master of Death

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    Jun 8, 2014 #4
    Reading the first two chapters, whille I ilke Aunn, she overthinks way, way too much. It gets really annoying. The author is good as are the main characters, but she tells everything by Aunn thoughts, very little show.

    And her rationalisation, once or twice is acceptable, but she always reach the right conclusion. It gets very difficult to believe she doesn't have foresight on the story. For now, a 3,8. It might go up or down.
     
  5. Shouldabeenadog

    Shouldabeenadog Death Eater ⭐

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    Jun 12, 2014 #5
    After 3 chapters, I don't like the technical aspects. The writing is just too verbose and full of run ons.

    The lead character does ring true for me though. Give it 3/5 for good effort and good characters.