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WIP In Blackest Night by spencer1519 - M - DC

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Bramastra, Mar 27, 2015.

  1. Bramastra

    Bramastra Groundskeeper

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    Name: In Blackest Night
    Author: spencer1519
    Genre: Adventure
    Rating: M
    Status: WIP
    Link: http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/in-blackest-night-dc-si.3869/#post-706498
    Summary: Spencer Ericson is revived by the black lantern ring just after the events of Blackest Night, given the title of torc bearer as he is the last Black Lantern he sets off to change the way Black Lanterns are percieved, and gain a new power source that doesn't rely on human hearts.

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    When the story starts off the main character is actually pretty enjoyable to read and is pretty far from a mary sue considering just how many times he "dies", and then his first attempt to be a hero meets with an almost really fucks him up the ass and just how much he has to struggle really makes his victories very satisfying
     
    Last edited: Mar 27, 2015
  2. Republic

    Republic The Snow Queen –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    So ... why should we read this? What's good about it? What isn't?
     
  3. S1234567890m

    S1234567890m Third Year

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    It's good until the latest arc which was just disappointing.
     
  4. Callagan

    Callagan Fourth Year

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    I only managed to get through most of the first act, but it looked like a standard Spacebattles SI story, nothing above average or worth recommending. Maybe it gets better later on, but all the warning signs I saw suggest it doesn't.
     
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