Title: Led by the Spirits
Author: Mali-caren
Suggested Genre: Romance
Rating: M [Really a T]
Pairing: Harry/Luna

Summary: Harry’s 21 and life is getting hard...harder then usual that is. Ginny just dumped him, the war is escalating because he can’t find Voldemort, and he’s not handling things all too well. But how could a night out drinking, a certain girl who has become a woman, and a man using a kwickspell course change anything? Two words, it can.
Harry’s in WAY over his head


Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3062991/1/

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It's a light read so far, coming in at 4 chapters. Updates are slow as well, but grammar, mechanics, and writing style are all top notch.

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The Sheep Says: "Bahahah" [Awesomely Wooly]

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There is mentioning of a monster in his chest multiple times. I don't think its being used in satire just seems like the writer actually likes it.

After reading her profile I don't like the direction the story will probally be going at all.

2/5

 

Diffrent, It almost feels like Luna is Using him though. and what in the world is all this By Play about She-who-should-be-Eviscerated? Also, WAAAAYYY to much info about 'Molly-Wobbles' {Shudder}

Fairly creative so far however. Luna's excentricities are still annoyingly present and Unexplained, and the snorkack is cliche' at this point.

3.5/5

 

Heh...not great, but not terrible either. If the author hadn't made it so that Luna's eyes were no longer bulbous, I'd have stopped reading.

S'why Harry/Luna always irritates me...she's too weird, and I can't get over the image of her eyes popping out in a crazed fashion.

3.5/5

 

Tried to read this awhile back, problem is that it sucks, terribly, and has nothing even remotely entertaining in it. 1/5

 

It's decent, and while most of the mechanics like the grammar and structure of the story is sound, just seems too unbelievable to me that Harry would accept something like a drunken marriage to Luna so quickly.

3/5

 

It read well, in the bit I read. It just seemed as if it was an OC character called Luna. I couldn't get very far in. All in all, not something I'd read.

2/5

 

I've been waiting awhile for a good H/L fic where Luna doesn't show that it was all an act or something, or somehow grows out of her weirdness. While I'm not entirely sure if this one has a shot, I'll keep reading in hopes that it lives up to what I want it to be. Meh. It probably won't.

 

it is not something i will read as i got quickly bored. 2/5

 

I didn't like it so I will give it 2/5

 

Cant say i was a huge fan of this, infact i thought it sucked pretty bad but its alot better than some i have read so i will give it 2/5. Not terrible but could do with alot of work.

 

I really dislike the way most people write Luna. Because it can't be a Luna story if she isn't spouting off crap about imaginary creatures. It's almost as bad as Dumbledore and the god awful lemon drops. The rest of the story is ehh.

2/5

 

I donno, I actually liked it. It was fun, a bit fluffy, but every once in a while those stories are appreciated (to add variety and to save from boredom). Plus the Harry/Luna aspect was also nice. I had no problems with her character either, seems like a more realistic take on her character, rather than the common exaggerated one.

Gave it a 4/5 and looking forward to reading further.

 

I’ve been reading this for a while. Like Rain said, it is fluffy – and while I don’t usually go for that, sometimes it can be nice. I dunno, I like this one.

4/5 from me.