Title: Leadership
Author: Meinos Kaen
Rating: M
Pairing: None so far, though it looks like Link/OC
Summary: Fourteen year old Link's a thief with his only living relative. He's after the treasure that will set him and his Gramps up for the rest of their lives. Could be more trouble than it's worth. Magical armor never did fit in a Steam Punk world...

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3877815/1/The_Legend_of_Zelda_Book_of_Mobius

One of the better stories I've ever read, though I doubt that means much to you. It's a very good story, and I haven't spotted any mistakes with grammar, etc. The plot is well done and thankfully you don't know what's coming while it does keep you entertained. The only problem I can see anyone possibly having is the jargon tossed about, though it's easy to figure out just what each word means.

4.5/5

 

A good story and I do like a Link that isn't a wet rag, bowing and kow-towing to Zelda or anyone else whim. But this Link is a bit to arrogant and its making me hope he gets knocked down a peg or two.

3.5/5

Also, Clayton you have the wrong title and author in your post, just to let you know

 

Eneps,your concerns are well-founded, but we are talking about a Link in the environment he's in, he has to run all across Hyrule to go dungeon crawling for (at least in one instance) tea ingredients, and the people he's doing this for are...less than grateful. Oh, and let's not forget that he was

Spoiler

raised by Ganondorf.

Also, I'd like to ask your thoughts on The Shift.

My apologies. If a mod would please edit them to this.

Title: Legend of Zelda: Book of Mobius
Author: Sealinkchan

 

Alright I'll admit that Link should have an attitude with Monk and the others. since they are pricks, but not with the other people such as the guards and common folk.

The Shift in my opinion is a pretty original concept. I don't remember reading anything that used somthing like that. Though it makes me wonder what actually caused it, it couldn't have been just the magic bursting free from whereever it was sealed. I'm thinking Ganondorf had more of a hand in the Shift.

 

Dude, when I saw Meinos Kaen on the author, I flipped out. That was seriously messed up. Anyway this is actually pretty tolerable for a Zelda fic, most the time I get 5,000 word chapters that jsut describe the video game.

4/5

 

Haha, why did you flip out? Truthfully I did in my own way, and I'm just curious if it's for the same reason. I will check this story out.

 

I know all his stories, and he has been focusing on his Naruto story. I got pissed that he dropped it and was doing a Zelda fic,"He dropped Leadership for this?"

Turns out it was just a weird typo.

 

My thoughts exactly Eneps.

And the type was from my copy/pasting the format for it, and then I didn't fully fix the system. So, could a mod please edit it to the proper title and author?

 

I'm pretty sure you can edit your own post Clayton just hit the edit button at the bottom of your post.

 

There's an edit cutoff time, I believe it's 24 hours. I did the OP on the 19th. So yeah.