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Oneshot Lost in Transmission by Koi Lungfish - T - Transformers

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Mercenary, Feb 13, 2013.

  1. Mercenary

    Mercenary Snake Eater

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    Title: Lost in Transmission
    Author: Koi Lungfish
    Rating: T
    Fandom: Transformers
    Genre: Horror/Mystery
    Pairing: Ask Mercenary
    DLP-Category: Misc / Anime,Cartoon,Comics
    Words: 2,535
    Published: April 15, 2008
    Status: Complete
    Summary:G1, S2 - Soundwave loses radio contact with Starscream whilst he's on patrol over the ocean.

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4198576/1/Lost-in-Transmission


    Review: G1, Season 2. The author writes slash but its not in this fic.

    I think this can be classed as a kind of horror or at least creepy type fic.

    Bermuda Triangle

    Edit: Damnit. Forgot to put the fandom in the title.


    Edit by Minion:
    As if the fandom had been the only thing you forgot...
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Feb 14, 2013
  2. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Another important point, it's only 2.5k words complete. I'll have plenty of time to read this little oneshot after work today.
     
  3. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    This story still has seven days until I move it. If it doesn't get any rating or reviews, I'll move it into the trash bin.


    EDIT March 3: Moved based on Mercs review and vote. It's not as if anyone else is going to read it...
     
    Last edited: Mar 6, 2013
  4. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I finally got around to reading this. It's actually fairly good. You can feel the tension ratchetting up until the inevitable climax, and then the uncomfortable ending. The scene is exactly as long as it needs to be. 4/5.
     
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