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Naruto Cliches.

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Verse of Darkness, Jun 20, 2006.

  1. Verse of Darkness

    Verse of Darkness Denarii Host

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    Not sure if I could post this here, but what are some Naruto Cliches? (Mods, if this the incorrect place can you please move it?)
    • Jiraiya takes Naruto away at birth and is on par with the Akatsuki.
    • Yaoi.
     
  2. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    1)Naruto summons Foxes

    2)Naruto is uber powerful but still takes shit from everyone

    3)Kyuubi attacked because of Orochimaru
     
  3. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nope, this is in the right forum. :)

    And I haven't read many Naruto fics yet...but I would have to say the most annoying thing is Orochimaru somehow controlling Kyuubi. I like my Kyuubi to be evil and destructive, or at least have been evil and destructive, then mellowed out a bit during his 12 years in Naruto.
     
  4. Zero

    Zero Seventh Year

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    Naru/Hina 'nuff said.
     
  5. Rain

    Rain Pirate Navigator of the 7 Seas

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    - Kyuubi "changing" because of Naruto and calling him "Kit". (It can be done well, but it's been done badly more than not.)

    - Naruto being almost beaten to death numerous times when a child. (I'm sure he hadn't had the happiest childhood, but some people are just unrealistic with this.)

    (s'all I can think of at the moment >_>)
     
  6. Myst

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    Lets see... Naruto running away because of abuse is a cliche

    Itachi training him.

    Gaara, Naruto and Haku "Genin Team"

    Non Evil Kyuubi

    Tsunade or Jiraiya raise him outside of Konoha

    Learning the Rasengan even if hes not a leaf-nin

    Hirashin no Jutsu(Spelling) Naruto using the Konoha's Yellow Flash jutsu.

    a New village in Wave Country.

    Sasuke comming back to Konoha

    Kyuubi having a human form.

    Naruto using weights and or weight seal.

    Naruto having control over an element.

    well.. Thats all I can think of right now. My second Naruto story I always look at whats common and avoid it as much as I can.
     
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  7. HiddenETC

    HiddenETC Second Year

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    - Orochimaru killing all the Uchihas instead of Itachi
    - Kyuubi attacking the village because of a dead mate/kits
    - Naruto gets a really high rank at a young age or becomes a severely overpowered genin
     
  8. Ryuu Ken

    Ryuu Ken Second Year

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    These I don't agree with personally.

    Cliches, let's see.

    Naruto taking up Zabuza's sword, I've only seen Never Cut Twice use it wel

    Naruto dying from Sasuke's Chidori to the chest and Kyuubi decided to merge with Naruto because he respects him so much.

    Sakura suddenly seeing the light after Sasuke leaves and goes out with Naruto

    Naruto getting exiled from the village after the rescue mission

    Naruto inventing styles from computer games or other manga's
     
  9. LINKed up

    LINKed up Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    Naruto being beat to death because he failed to bring back Sasuke

    Yondaime being Naruto's dad

    Naruto having a bloodline that is a mix of Byakugan and Sharingan

    Kyuubi hearing ALL of Naruto's thoughts
     
  10. Myst

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    That one is so obviously canon is really not funny. Not exactly a cliche.

    What is a cliche is Yondiame being brought back to life because of that.
     
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  11. LINKed up

    LINKed up Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    That is true, and also people saying that Naruto was used as a container because Yondaime didn't want to burden another family is a cliche.
     
  12. KeshinNoAkui

    KeshinNoAkui Seventh Year

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    Most. cliches. EVER.

    Seriously, I read that story and thought it was a parody up until he graduated using Hiraishin, Kuchiyose, and getting 100% on everything else.

    Add to the fact he falls in love with a girl (and makes out with her) after knowing her a total of 1 1/2 days, and you have the largest cliche in history.

    But let's see what mine are....

    -Slash (definately not cannon, not even the Naru/Sasu kiss was willing in the Japanese version)

    -Naru/Hina (It's been done to death, but there are a few exceptions).

    -Beating Itachi after 3 years of training (He was barely able to hold his own against the Missing-Nin clone of Itachi in the Manga for fucks sake).

    -Being trained by Kyuubi (Yes, it's inevitable, but most of the time they mainly give him summoning for Foxes)

    -Naruto having an unbelievable bloodline (Like being able to copy a move after seeing it JUST once. It's called the Sharingan folks, and he don't have it).

    -Naruto having a bloodline period (He's got Kyuubi, he doesn't need any more power).

    That's mainly it.
     
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  13. Blackstar

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    Naruto/HP crossovers

    Mysterious nin training naruto away from konoha
     
  14. KeshinNoAkui

    KeshinNoAkui Seventh Year

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    Those (Naru/HP) aren't too bad so long as there's a good explanation and how they tie them in...

    Only good one

    That's the only good one that isn't filled with cliches or anything of the sort. Plus it's actually written pretty decently.
     
  15. HiddenETC

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    Actually, since the Kyuubi's soul is bound to Naruto's, they are, in essence, one being, so it should naturally be able to hear all of Naruto's thoughts.

    And plus, the Kyuubi can hear Naruto's thoughts in canon as well (or else how would Naruto access his chakra, 'cause he obviously doesn't take a short trek through some maze like sewer system to stop at an oversized cage and yell at some huge demon each time he needs some special chakra).
     
  16. Mech Angel.V.2.

    Mech Angel.V.2. Second Year

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    Aint that the truth. What about the entire shinobi continent being mysteriously hidden by illusionists or Harry being related to Naruto or the Uchiha clan.
     
  17. LINKed up

    LINKed up Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    Then shouldn't Naruto be able to hear Kyuubi's thoughts as well?
     
  18. Mech Angel.V.2.

    Mech Angel.V.2. Second Year

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    Never thought about it like that. Hmmm. I guess some dont portray it that way because they think Kyuubi is a tool for filler, pointless banter, and giving Naruto chakra. Thats another cliche. Dumb!Kyuubi.
     
  19. arkeus

    arkeus Seventh Year

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    Ah.. i have read a lot of Naruto fanfiction, and i wonder about what you call cliche.

    -As far as i know, there is only one fic that have a hidden village in wave
    -Kyuubi being dumb is actualy rarer than him being an endless source of jutsu.
    -Sakura growing up after Sasuke left is actualy canon...
    -I have never seen a good superpower!Naruto at a young age (i am trying to write one, but for the moment it's trash so...)
    -Wearing weitgh is a bit inevitable if naruto wants to be half way decent.

    -Kyuubi training Naruto is really a cliche, and it *is* evitable.
     
  20. Lord Bill

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    Suupa Kurishu Naruto right here. The author does mention being "inspired" by many other fics. It has, along with many of those listed:
    -Naruto making a deal with Kyuubi, merging and getting charka, improved senses and physical changes
    -Naruto being left a letter/getting notes from the Fourth, with his jutsus
    -Itachi kills his clan for "noble" reasons, usually for Sasuke
    -Since Naruto is "in good" with the Hokage he can get Itachi a pardon
    -Naruto gives Kyuubi a body, usually to "save" him from being absorbed
    -Naruto helps Gaara, usually by fixing his seal or getting it fixed
    One I haven't seen mentioned is the fact that Naruto always seems to learn the Kage Bunshin, no matter where he is. I think this is at least, if not more, prevalent than learning the Rasengan.
     
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