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Naruto fic Ideas

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Feoffic, Aug 8, 2006.

  1. Feoffic

    Feoffic Alchemist DLP Supporter

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    A place for Naruto fic ideas, no cliches if possible please.

    .Sasuke is adopted by the Hyuga Clan after the masacre, but only as a Branch House member (just how fucked up do you think he will be this time around?).

    More will follow; my mind always creates ideas, but my hand is to weak to write them.
     
  2. Verse of Darkness

    Verse of Darkness Denarii Host

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    * Naruto is inlisted into ROOT.
    * Naruto is assigned under Asuma.
    * Uchiha Shisui actually survived (would always want to see that...)
     
  3. LT2000

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    Somehow I don't think Sasuke would tolerate that scenario...he was old enough after the massacre to know the kind of life he'd lead with the Hyuuga.
     
  4. Verse of Darkness

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    * Naruto having a different Bijuu (Kyuubi has yet to appear in Naruto).
    * Naruto/Yugito
     
  5. Raijin

    Raijin Slug Club Member

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    Somehow even if Sasuke is forced into the clan can you imagine him not committing suicide after getting a branch seal? Because i guarentee you that the Hyuugas would want to do that.
     
  6. Feoffic

    Feoffic Alchemist DLP Supporter

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    He may be old enough to realize what kind of life a Branch member may have, but does that mean he actually knows? Also, he has just witnessed his most beloved family member kill the rest of his beloved family, a traumatization that one does not easily recover from (as we see in cannon). Also, who says that the Hyuga would actualy tell anyone that they are adopting him into the Branch Family?
     
  7. Myst

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    Naruto trained by Zetsu. I'd love to see that.
     
  8. DemonDream

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    Naruto going out, hunting down the other jinchuruki and killing them to prevent Akatsuki from gaining their power. I don't think that has been done yet.
     
  9. Jon

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    I was tempted to have Naruto hunt down all of the Biju's but It isn't a very nice story concept. Even with Dark!Naruto you need him to atleast feel something, and to have him kill those like him just so they can't be caught by the Akatsuki would be a complete violation of his character. Unless they pulled an Itachi personality out of him.

    Bubble Technique!Naruto, Naruto uses bubbles to take over the world and defeat everyone! -cackles.-

    EDIT: Oh, and I'm being serious. -grins.-
     
  10. Feoffic

    Feoffic Alchemist DLP Supporter

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    Itachi like Naruto is interesting, if done properly. Although I prefer the Shika-like Itachi more than anything else.

    I eagerly await the crack-fic.
     
  11. Evergreen_Queen

    Evergreen_Queen First Year

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    Just wondering if Naruto doing this before Akatsuki capturing the first 2 jinchuruki? Wondering if they released any info about those two?

    Anyways, if you could create a bloodlimit, what would it be and why?
     
  12. Moloch

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    Probably a Doujutsu of some kind, iris colours are choices between purple, yellow or grey and it'd have levels like the Sharingan but unlike it, it can't copy. Rather, it'd slow the world down to the rate depending on the level of the User, but unlike the Sharingan, instead of the marks to show the level, its how vibrant the eye colours are. Basically, to the User enemy, the User would have inhuman reflexes that are even better then Uchihas while not able to copy techniques.

    And I was thinking of a bloodline like this before I read Surrarrin's fic.

    Anyway, original ideas for Naruto fanfic...

    Naruto raised in Kirigakure or any of the other Great Shinobi Nations... (Kiri! Kiri! Kiri!)

    Naruto as an expert in one area like Lee is in Taijutsu instead of his all-rounder thing that everyone has in their story.

    Naruto specialise in a single element.

    I feel very self congradualatory due to the fact I pulled two out of three of these suggestions from my own fic... Heh.

    EDIT: I hate typing with one and a half hands. Damn broken fingers... I made so many typos its not funny... I love the EDIT button though.
     
  13. Verse of Darkness

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    * Orochimaru fucks up with Naurto's seal to prevent the Akatsuki from taking the Kyuubi.
     
  14. Feoffic

    Feoffic Alchemist DLP Supporter

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    Who wants a bloodline limit? Jus give me a bloodline (no limit involved) like Haku's water manipulation one.
     
  15. Verse of Darkness

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    I would make a bloodline limit that was more of a "curse" version of the Hyuuga. These group of Shinobi had always craved for the power of the Bijuu, using various kenjutsu to capture and slay oni, they have finally managed to gain the demonic power to an extent. Nothing perpostrous is gained from having an oni, except for the fact that now instead of hitting the chakra circulatory system, the group of shinobi are now able to hit the circulatory system in general (veins, arteries, and organs, etc.) Another "gift" granted for having an oni would be the ability to mould their chakra around the designated body part to heighten the flesh to an extent. With this ability, they are able to pull off and stab flesh with just their hands. Meh, got the idea from Hunter x Hunter Killua...
     
  16. Myst

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    I created several Bloodlines and a Bloodline limit for my fic. I had to for the location since it isnt Konoha.

    The plot bunny thats running through my head at the moment is: "What if Uchiha Shisui survived?"

    Of course there would be things to work out, but it can be done.
     
  17. Feoffic

    Feoffic Alchemist DLP Supporter

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    How about if Itachi fails to beat Shisui and does not gain the Uber-Sharingan?
     
  18. li.u

    li.u Fourth Year

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    Surely possible...but you'd still have to work out a lot of stuff. Just because he survives he won't be automatically connected to Naruto (and i hate non-Naruto-centric fics) and starts to train him or something. Hence, you have to come up with something that gets him closer to Naruto. Dunno...perhaps Naruto having something to do with him surviving (like walking in onto the scene, screaming around like a madman and forcing Itachi to retreat before being caught or something =/ )
     
  19. HiddenETC

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    Well, Naruto somehow stopping the Uchiha massacre, or at least getting involved in it, has been done before. Maybe you can just have Naruto steal a box of pocky from him or something. (For some odd reason, Itachi likes pocky a lot in fanfiction which have him as a saner character. Does anyone know why?)
     
  20. li.u

    li.u Fourth Year

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    Hmm...only ever saw it in 'Never Cut Twice`...but that was quite popular with people...so probably just copied it, though I can't really imagine a non-humor fic to sporting an pocky addicted Itachi =/
     
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