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Abandoned Naruto Fuujinroku by Daneel Rush - M - Naruto

Discussion in 'Naruto' started by Rahkesh Asmodaeus, Nov 13, 2008.

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    Nov 13, 2008 #1
    Title: Naruto Fuujinroku
    Author: Daneel Rush
    Rating: M
    Summary: These are the chronicles of the Golden Wind God. In the beginning, the orphan became a heir. In Fantasia, the heir will become a shinobi.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3576691/1/Naruto_Fuujinroku

    The summary is incredibly strange. I'm still not sure wtf Fantasia has to do with anything...

    But it's a good story. Naruto gets blinded as a kid, but becomes stronger because of it.

    There are a few parts that just make stare at the screen. The two OC's that care for Naruto. Kinda Mary-Sue and Gary-Stuish for me. They just irritate me. Also... there's a bit of wtf pedophilia in it when a 13 year old Naruto gets birthday kisses from Hanabi when she's like 7. o_O
     
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