Oh? Why's that?

 

A few people told me I had a lot of missing words and problems. Plus, they said the fights were sub-par...so I yanked it to fix the problems.

 

Was it not edited? What happened to your editor(s)? He's not slacking off is he cause if so I'm definitely having a word with him.

J/k, j/k.

Anyways, did you have some doubts about it before you posted cause pulling the chapter just a day later and after hearing "a few" negative comments seem like an overreaction and you don't seem like the fellow to overreact.

 

Was it something I said? All I meant was that I myself don't like NarutoIno, didn't really meant to say, "The story is crap, stop typing." I still read all the fics you write and I am still angry at the lack of updates on Eleven! It is probably the only good NarutoYugito.

 

The Price of Honor? >=D

 

I find it ironically funny that the title of the next chapter of a Naruto fanfic I was reading is this ^.

 

Mrriddler:
Well, I thought it was edited. But apparently it was riddled with missing words (whihc was the primary reason for pulling it). As for my beta, they are still playing catch up...having just finsihed an edit of Chapter 14.
AS for the second part, nah, no doubts about it really other than one paticular fight. Still as I said, it was mainly because of the missing words...I figured I'd save myself the headache.

ZeroTheDestroyer:
Had nothing to do with your disapproval of Naru/Ino. I've had people against that pairing since day one of Altered History, I doubt its going to persuade me to stop writing this now. As for Eleven, to put you at ease, I had half of the next chapter finished...but life dogpiled me. Once I get back on schedule with SW I will hammer out that chapter. So, Eleven is on its way...soon(ish).

 

The Price of Honor is a good samurai-Naruto story on TFF that's up to its 7th chapter. It looks like a Yugito pairing.

 

Yeah, I'm currently following it. Now, that's how Samurai in Naruto should be but, wrong forum to discuss it in.

 

Chapter has been reuploaded.

 

It was a good chapter and the fights were excellent.

Only complaint is the cliffhanger at the end. I want to know what happened with Ino and if Karin really was the one who almost killed her or if it was Madara.

Also what happened with Sasuke and Sakura.

 

Having not seen the original chapter, can't say whether it's better or not, but the chapter was satisfactory, Geor-Sama. I expected more out of the Ino/Sakura right but I imagine you're saving Sakura's more powerful techniques for later on.

 

Chapter 25 is up.

Shino and Kekio are really cute. They are the cutest couple.

I felt that the scene between Ino and Naruto a little bit cliche.

 

hmm why do i get the feeling when naruto finds out about anko's "death" and the kumo in wave that, they might to have to rename wave to dead or blood? because all that rage and anger has to come out sometime, it always does.

 

Where is this Chapter 25 you speak of?

 

Here you go: http://georsama.110mb.com/sw25.htm.

 

Ah, yeah I figured. I actually like this chapter much more than the previous one.

 

It's been updated here: http://georsama.110mb.com/sw26.htm

I'm waiting for when Naruto finds out that Anko is alive and goes ape-shit on her. Props to Hanabi.

 

wow Naruto is just going to go ape shit insane when his anger finally comes out, i almost feel pity for whoever he directs it too :awesome