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Offspring by Jayne 1955 - R - OneShot - HP/LL

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Manatheron, Feb 14, 2007.

  1. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    Title: Offspring
    Author: Jayne 1955
    Rating:R
    Genre: Dark Romance
    DLP Category: Restricted or Romance
    Pairing:Harry/Luna slight Neville/Ginny Ron/Hermoine
    Status: Complete
    Summary: A different piece. Voldimort has a plan to humiliate all the purebloods who would dare to oppose him, And Harry is a Lucky Exception.
    Link: http://www.restrictedsection.org/file.php?file=2312

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    Different fic. not much by way of action, but a more believable storyline. Kinda a pussy!Harry fic though... or possibly just Cannon!Harry, the two are practically interchangable. {Shrug} What can I say It's a Decent way to kill a few minutes.

    3.5/5
     
  2. ZanyMuggle

    ZanyMuggle Third Year

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    Very good piece of fluff. Believable, interesting HP/LL. I would describe Harry as "non-deific" (i.e. non-god-like, if I spelled it right), not as a pussy.

    4.65725 / 5
     
  3. deathinapinkboa

    deathinapinkboa Minister of Magic

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    Need I say more?

    Yes actually, I do.

    Harry gets gay raped.

    Don't waste your time.

    2/5
     
  4. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    you should really put a spoiler tag on that Quote there shooter, It's one of the final paragraphs of the story afterall.
     
  5. deathinapinkboa

    deathinapinkboa Minister of Magic

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    How do I put one up? I actually did try to figure it out before I posted, but I don't know how.
     
  6. Krull

    Krull Denarii Host

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    BELIEVABLE?

    How in the name of the twelve horseman of the apocalipse can you name this abortion of a storyline believable? Voldemort captures Harry and let's him live because he wants his baby? WTF. Then Harry basically shags Luna because

    ....how lovely....Ginn....Luna believes in Harry!

    ......and of course
    ...

    ...how can you forget
    Even ignoring the gargantuan levels of OCC-ness this is still not worth reading.

    2/3
     
  7. Klael

    Klael Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    I...couldn't get past the summary. 'Voldimort'?!? JEEZ!!!!
     
  8. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    {Shrug}

    Whatever floats your respective boats.
    Incidentally, I did say MORE believable. Not ENTIRELY believable.

    {Rolls eyes}
     
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  9. Chilli

    Chilli Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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  10. Krull

    Krull Denarii Host

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    Oh, excuse me for not noticing, because of course, that makes all the difference in the world....

    And, I have to ask....more believable then what?

    The Office is more believable than this story!
     
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