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Oneshot Oh, Did You Have a Sob Story Too, Sasuke? by Sarah1281 - K+ - Naruto

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by PinstripedPajamas, Oct 14, 2010.

  1. PinstripedPajamas

    PinstripedPajamas Sixth Year DLP Supporter

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    Title: Oh, Did You Have a Sob Story Too, Sasuke?
    Author: Sarah1281
    Rating: K+
    Genre: Humor/Parody
    DLP Category: Naruto
    Pairing: None
    Words: 2,556
    Published: October 1, 2009
    Status: One-Shot, Complete
    Summary: Naruto is hurt that Sasuke didn't tell him about Itachi...or did he? Sasuke insists he talks about it all the time but Naruto hears too many sob stories to keep them all straight, Itachi tries to catch up with Sasuke and Kisame just wants to kill someone.
    Link: fanfiction.net

    In my opinion, there are far too few Naruto One-Shots in the library.

    This one is written by Sarah1281 who already has numerous stories in the library in various sections.

    Personally, I love the story. Great humor.

    4/5 for me.


    Checked: June 10, 2012
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Jun 10, 2012
  2. SmileOfTheKill

    SmileOfTheKill Magical Amber

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    This has a problem. The problem isn't the OOC part of it, it is that the out of character moment sounds like a bad forum argument instead of real people.
     
  3. Fiat

    Fiat The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    Pretty much all of Sarah1281's work suffers the same problem that SmileOfTheKill points out, but I still like her stuff. It's funny.

    This one isn't great, though. Even for her. 3/5
     
  4. Docker

    Docker Third Year

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    It's okay, out of character but so are many fanfics. It's a little funny, but nothing special. I'll give it 3/5.
     
  5. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    Agreed with the nothing special point. I lol'd at one or two points, but otherwise very forgettable. 3.5/5
     
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