Title: Probabilities of Love
Author:Zaywex
Category: General/Adventure
Ratings: T
Pairings: NONE ( Except Misa forcing someone else to be her boyfriend)
Summary:What if Jealous had set eyes on another human? What if Ryuk had dropped the note somewhere else?
Link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4722813/1/Probabilities_of_Love

So, the basic idea is that Jealous fals in love with Light instead of Misa and Ryuk chooses Misa instead of Light.

It`s a little short for now, the author is getting used to writing and the last chapters are a little rushed. Despite the lenght, the flow is nice and a little funny. And the most important thing is NO SLASH!

It`s hard to find a decent DN story without L x Light action.

4/5 from me.

 

It started off well, but towards the later chapters it just started feeling...disjointed and rushed. The characterisation was also butchered in those chapters as well.

3/5