WIP Tainted Ideals by Stormedge - T - Fate/Stay Night

Discussion in 'Fate/Stay Night' started by Dark Syaoran, Oct 4, 2011.

  1. silverlasso

    silverlasso Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    This story is great. I love the changes to Shirou's character. He's bloodthirsty and legitimately wants to actually win the Holy Grail War? Awesome.

    5/5
     
  2. Tesla

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    New chapter is great; the story's still of a consistently high quality. And 'Executor' Shirou is awesome.
     
  3. Deadsomeone

    Deadsomeone Third Year

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    Yeah the entire mental image is fantastic, Shirou's powers are really interesting, and it makes me interested with the direction the author's going to take it. It makes me think of a more limited version of Alex Mercer.
     
  4. DrSarcasm

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    New chapter up. Nothing special, just plot exposition filler. Still interesting though.
     
  5. yak

    yak Moderator Moderator DLP Supporter

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    I did enjoy this fic early on, and the setup is quite novel and worth reading, but the longer it goes the less interesting it gets. I don't expect these characters to surprise me and I don't feel invested in them. The latest chapters haven't been living up to expectations.

    3/5.
     
  6. Nemrut

    Nemrut The Black Mage Prestige

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    I liked this one enough, but I have to say, I don't care one bit for Assassin, who feels like a generic, jealous female OC, which she is.

    The rest though, is really interesting and I like the premise. Ilya and her new servant is a good combination.

    3-4/5, not sure yet, I have to see how this ends.
     
  7. TMNTurtwig

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    She's not actually an OC. She's a character from an unpublsihed Fate/Stay Night game called Fate/Apocrypha. Other servants from the game are Frankenstein's Monster, Shakespeare, and Jean of Arc.
     
  8. yak

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  9. Nemrut

    Nemrut The Black Mage Prestige

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    Really, Shakespeare? That seems...odd.

    Oh well, didn't know that. I have to say, that article makes her sound more interesting now.
     
  10. Nargles

    Nargles Seventh Year

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    About fucking time: Update.

    Shit's getting realz
     
  11. DrSarcasm

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    New chapter up. Interesting implications on Shirou's nature and what role he'll play in the end game.
     
  12. tragicmat1

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    Wow, probably one of the best chapters yet :D
     
  13. Fenraellis

    Fenraellis Minister of Magic

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    Just got to reading this yesterday, which is rather convenient, and have quite enjoyed it myself.
     
  14. Betosa

    Betosa Third Year

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    The last chapter was really good, if he can continue this storyline and make a satisfying closure I will be very glad.