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Abandoned The Four Seasons by Quantum Cat - T - Naruto

Discussion in 'Naruto' started by Shezza, Mar 29, 2009.

  1. Shezza

    Shezza Renegade 4 Life DLP Supporter

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    Title: The Four Seasons
    Author: Quantum Cat
    Rating: T
    Genre: Drama/General
    Pairing: Naruto x Kyuubi (though I have no idea how)
    Chapters: 2
    Words: 12,014
    Updated: January 14, 2010
    Published: October 21, 2009

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5458377/1/The_Four_Seasons

    Summary: Hierarchy of life: Demons on top. Everything else on the bottom. That's the creed that all demons follow. Though what would that make a demon sealed into a human? Demons weren't made to be humans, after all. NarutoxKyubi


    Hey guys. Here's a reccommendation for a Naruto fanfic I found just now. I'm putting this up because it has, in my opinion, the best characterization of Kyuubi ever. It's hard to put into words but the author has really done it well, to the point where I don't see how it can become Naruto/Kyuubi. One of the more defining moments for me was at the start.

    I'll give it 5/5. Give it a try.

    EDIT October 16, 2011: The link is working now (if it actually is the same story).


    Checked: June 11, 2012
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Jun 11, 2012
  2. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Needs more content. ;_;

    4/5
     
  3. Ksai

    Ksai Third Year

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    Meh.

    2/5

    Does this fic have ANY plot? I could not find any after reading five chapters.
     
  4. Shezza

    Shezza Renegade 4 Life DLP Supporter

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    ...read to ten chapters. Then you'll see some plot :)
     
  5. slasheh

    slasheh Seventh Year

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    while the story moves VERY slowly, it has the best characterization of Kyuubi i've seen so far. Aside from that there isn't much yet, mostly because the story isn't that far along. Some parts are funny (the last chapter has a hilarious scene) and some are confusing so in total i'd give it 4 out of 5 so far.
     
  6. sincostan

    sincostan High Inquisitor

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    I put it on notifications, but there honestly isn't enough plot going on to review.

    In short, waiting for Kyuubi to grow T&A.
     
  7. Testament

    Testament Seventh Year

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    An interesting story, the writing style and the characterization of Kyuubi was what kept me reading, even with the plot somewhat lacking so far. Will be looking forward to some updates.

    4/5. Rating may change as events progress.
     
  8. Evan Tide

    Evan Tide Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    Story has been deleted or removed. Anyone know another location or have a copy saved?
     
  9. Siflet

    Siflet Third Year

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