Title: The Night Before
Author: Cypher3au
Rating: R
Genre: ...uh...
Pairing: Harry/Fleur
Words: 2697
Published: July 6, 2006
Status: Oneshot
Summary: The night before Bill and Fleur's wedding was one that Harry would remember vividly for a long time...
Link: http://ficwad.com/story/19280


A one-shot response to a monthly challenge on Potter's Place 3, though I'll most likely be adding one or two more chapters later on.



Checked by Minion, March 4, 2013
Checked by Dark Syaoran, October 29, 2013.

 

I've read this before and I’m quite surprise that you will continue it. A good twist with the vow and I can't wait on how you will show the reaction of the Order. Depending on how the story goes will be the main factor; will it become highly recommended or be thrown in the trash bin.

 

Agree with Jheph. Seems promising.

 

If you continue the story it could become quite good. If you keep it an oneshot... well, it's ok I suppose.

 

Really good. Would have prefered a little more 'lemony' content myself, but then I'm a bit of a perv. Still, good story. Looking forward to reading more.

 

The fic is decent with a lot of potential. However I think it should be a bit longer before it is moved out of this section. Keep up the good work though, it was a pleasure to read it.

 

I absolutely loved this fic...there is SO much potential in that single chapter that...well, erm, it looks great

I hope you continue this...I like GSH, but this is just such an awesome plot-bunny.

She freaking enslaved himself to him!!!!1!!1111111!!oneoneone!

^^No sarcasm...this really is a great idea. That last sentence is just me going apeshit.

 

I loved it. Although, to be honest, the fact that it's only a one-shot and you only plan to add a few more chapters leaves a sour taste in my mouth.

 

I loved it.

Please continue this if you get the time, it would make my day.

5 stars

Severely RECOMENDED

 

one of the best oneshots I have read in a long time, but this practically screams for continuation
I'd recommend leaving this as it is and writing sort of a 'sequel' to it

 

Great fic, seriously entertaining. Looking forward to the next chapter.

 

great as a one-shot and even better if you make it more...

 

This is a very interesting story, I hope you do continue it. Especially as the last sentence is definitely going to drive many people crazy if you call it off here.

 

Very good story. It belongs in the library.

 

^i agree with all of this ^

good story, even better if its expanded on with more chapters, and i wouldn't be annoyed to see an update to your other story as well

 

A very good fic, though I wouldn't recommend making it NC-17 if you continue, though it takes finesse to write about taking advantage of someones body without describing every smutty detail without any subtlety.

 

Interesting beginning. Please continue, soon.

 

Fuck that. There is so little Harry/Fleur smut, I'd like to see some.

 

Good begining for the story. But I think I'll wait till more chapters come out. This has a lot of promise though.

4/5 (so far)

 

That was FANTASTIC! I can't say if I want you to continue to quench my curiosity or leave it as is to keep the aura of mystery around the whole story. EXCELLENT work!

5/5