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WIP The Timeless Value of a Mended Friend by Green Tea Bubbles - T - Naruto

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Jarik, Oct 5, 2015.

  1. Kari Black

    Kari Black DA Member

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    I agree with most of the points that have been made already. Right now I would rate it at a tentative 4/5. I think the next few chapters are going to be pretty critical. Until now we've been operating mostly within the bounds of canon events, even if the character interactions and conflicting goals gave it an extra twist. But as of the latest chapter shit got real, and the way this is handled could bump it up to a more solid 4 for me, or it could go downhill very, very fast.

    Also: Dumbest name ever. The author really needs to do something about that.