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The Way of the Warrior by Cubster - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Leibhaftige Finsternis, Jul 29, 2006.

  1. Leibhaftige Finsternis

    Leibhaftige Finsternis First Year

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    Title: The Way of the Warrior
    Author: Cubster
    Rating: M
    Genre: Alternates
    Pairing: Harry/Katie
    Status: WIP
    Summary: Before HBP HPKing Arthur Xover. Tristan never died, Merlin sent him forward in time so that Dumbledore could have him help train Harry in the ways of the knight. HarryKatieBell

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3070158/1/

    This is pretty interesting idea. I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors, but to tell the truth, I am not very picky, and since I am a horrible judge of true quality , I will leave the job in more capable hands, namely all of the crazy people who post on this forum.
     
  2. madeyemoody

    madeyemoody High Inquisitor

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    I hate abuse strike 1

    though dursley gets his arm cut off so meh


    that is a plus strike -1

    everybody angsting about harry learning to kill strike 2


    So it's average for a crossover I'll give it my judgement in few more chapters


    madeyemoody
     
  3. Leibhaftige Finsternis

    Leibhaftige Finsternis First Year

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    Damn... I started to put another post and lost what I was going to put somewhere inside my mind. Hopefully it was stupid or not put into my mental shredder.
     
    Last edited: Jul 29, 2006
  4. Myst

    Myst Headmaster

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    I personally didn't like it, Yet I enjoyed the movie.

    Seemed poorly written, the romance was easily played with the Hand of God Syndrome and I noticed a few misspelling and things proof-reading would catch.


    Not reccomended.
     
    Last edited: Jul 30, 2006
  5. Dragon Watcher

    Dragon Watcher Third Year

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    I'll reserve comment for a few chapters but, the idea isn't that bad and I've never seen this type of crossover without total revamp of background information.
     
  6. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    I donno. Its not all that captivating. 3/5

    And for Gods sake! Its LAY in bed. I am getting so sick and tired of seeing "he lied in bed".

    Lay - To cause to lie down
    Lied - To present false information with the intention of deceiving

    You lay on a hammock after you lied about jacking off the horse.
     
  7. madeyemoody

    madeyemoody High Inquisitor

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    :lol: :lol: :lol: hahahahahahahahahaha
     
  8. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    It's not too bad of a story, though a few things really pissed me off, such as Tristan just taking to the magical world like a fish to water, Harry's instaship with Katie (little more build up, please?), and using the excuse of Tristan being a muggle and having Fudge threaten Obliviation just to get Harry as Tristan's son. With that said, it's not too horrible. 3.5/5
     
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