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Abandoned [Unchained] by [lucifael75] - [NC-17]

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by dragon_89, May 28, 2008.

  1. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    Haha so full of cliches that its actually become like what most of you have mentioned, a guilty pleasure. I like that he's powering out the updates, like 10k word average for each chapter is awesome, 1 each day for 4 days now, does anyone know if its actually finished and gonna keep on keepin on?
     
  2. KillerEggLord

    KillerEggLord Third Year

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    Chapters 16-20 are now in beta, which will be released "when they are done" (not time given).

    He is currently writing chapter 21.

    Don't know anything else beyond that.
     
  3. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    16 is up on his Yahoo group. Very interesting chapter, even if Snape does get laid by a hot chick.
     
  4. BloodRedSword

    BloodRedSword High Inquisitor DLP Supporter

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    How do you join his group?
     
  5. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    It's detailed earlier in the thread. Send the author an e-mail asking for an invite.
     
  6. Akuma-san

    Akuma-san First Year

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    I think of these fics as a milky way bar. That fluffy shit is the cliche's you really don't mind. The choclate is the original and funny stuff that has you on your ass. It is less abundant then the fluff be just right.

    The final lines of 16 kicked ass for me. Funny shit.

    4/5
     
  7. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    17 is up on the Yahell group. Quite a good chapter and should make a few of the H/HR shippers happy.
     
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  9. Anarchy

    Anarchy Half-Blood Prince DLP Supporter

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  10. iLost

    iLost Minister of Magic

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    Fixed that for you.
     
  11. Xantam

    Xantam Denarii Host

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    Pretentious much? The guy's hand probably slipped off the shift key for god's sake. It was one letter.
     
  12. iLost

    iLost Minister of Magic

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    Once or twice is no big deal really. We all make mistakes, Lord Anarchy just has a tendency to skip more than usual.

    Eleven times in his first page of "More Posts."
     
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  13. Anarchy

    Anarchy Half-Blood Prince DLP Supporter

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    Cool story bro. I also wear size 11.5 shoes, had waffles for breakfast, and just received a text from my friend Mike. Are we done talking about shit that doesn't matter?
     
  14. Swimdraconian

    Swimdraconian Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    What is this fuckery? o_O

    Is the story worth reading or not?

    Edit: Thanks for the heads up.
     
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  15. Kensington

    Kensington Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    No. It isn't.

    From what I remember - it's Harry sleeping with the female cast of the HP books with a plot that goes nowhere.
     
  16. Sesc

    Sesc Slytherin at Heart Moderator

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    Swim: It is, in a not too deep-"let's enjoy Harry having a g/f without any true love"-way -- until the author utterly ruins Lavender as a character in a 180° turn in order to force the Harem plot into the story, which then ruins the story. That's after a couple of chapters.

    Edit: I see that the link above requires membership. No, it's not that good.
     
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