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WIP Your Past, My Future by Slavok - T - Code Geass

Discussion in 'Anime, Cartoons, and Comics' started by DarkAizen, May 18, 2010.

4/5, 5 votes
  1. DarkAizen

    DarkAizen Professor DLP Supporter

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    May 18, 2010 #1
    Title: Your Past, My Future
    Author:Slavok
    Rating: T
    Genre: Adventure/Romance
    DLP Category: Other Fandoms
    Pairing: Lelouch/Kallen
    Status: WIP
    Summary: Lelouch suffered defeat, despair, and ultimately betrayal, but when he faces the Emperor, he wakes up before Zero was created. Suddenly in the past, he has the power to remake the future. Time travel. Probably Lelouch Kallen pairing.
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    After reading Lelouch of the Second Chance, I found this gem. Another Time Travel fic.

    This fic reminds me a lot of Time and Again, in which not only the hero but also the villain travels back in time. Also, Lelouchs memory is not perfect, he doesn't remember every little detail like in Second Chance but some things still happen like they did originally, but it changes as the story progresses.

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  2. ZeroTheDestroyer

    ZeroTheDestroyer Auror

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    May 18, 2010 #2
    Time and Again turned into a train wreck. Hopefully this one will not crash. Making villains travel back in time tends to do that. Hopefully this one will not turn out the same.
     
  3. Scott

    Scott Professor DLP Supporter

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    May 19, 2010 #3
    How is Lelouch's character? Is it the same (mostly) from like the anime?


    Edit: I'll just check this out and the Lelouch of the Second chance and see how they are :D
     
  4. Red Aviary

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    May 21, 2010 #4
    I left a quick review:
    For a Code Geass fic, it's definitely above-average. Not up to par with Lelouch of Britannia, but passing that bar would be expecting too much. Hopefully he takes that offer to come here for some beta work--he could use some work in a few areas. I'll have it on my alerts in the meantime.