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Abandoned Break the World by Rihaku - T - Naruto

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Potterondrugs, Jul 29, 2010.

  1. Potterondrugs

    Potterondrugs Seventh Year

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    Title: Break the World
    Author: Rihaku
    Rating: T
    Genre: Adventure/Romance/AU
    DLP Category: Other Fandoms
    Pairing: NaruIno, SakuSasu, NaruSaku
    Chapters: 14
    Words: 41,035
    Updated: October 13, 2007
    Published: September 16, 2007
    Status: Abandoned

    Summary: Women forgive, but do not forget. Men forget, but do not forgive. Uzumaki Naruto can only forget so much.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3787948/1/Break_the_World

    Really Unique Au with a somewhat similar character develop only Naruto is assertive and strong from the beginning.


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  2. GiantMonkeyMan

    GiantMonkeyMan High Inquisitor

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    It's a nice dystopic AU but it does seem a little overdramatic. Worth a read... probably not worth a reread.
     
  3. Potterondrugs

    Potterondrugs Seventh Year

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    Well I sort of enjoyed how dramatic it was, although I will admit the author seemed a little intent on showing how cool naruto was but I was never bored.
     
  4. Otters

    Otters Groundskeeper ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    The AU that the author has built was dynamic and interesting enough to keep me reading until the words ran out, but being untouched in nearly three years, I doubt it'll ever be continued.

    And the omakes annoyed me. Five out of fourteen chapters were omakes. Blech.

    3/5 as it is; if it was a work in progress being updated frequently, I'd consider a 4/5.
     
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