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Do Not Meddle In The Affairs Of Wizards by Corwalch - G+

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by nonjon, May 26, 2006.

  1. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    I expected to be disappointed, and guess what? I was. Massively. Final rating is 2.5/5. Plot-holes from hell and an ending that was anti-climactic enough to inspire a drinking binge.
     
  2. Verminard

    Verminard Seventh Year

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    The trend I see in the author's stories are to reduce a lot of Harry's friends to shallow and unpleasant tools of the evil Dumbledore. This requires a huge suspension of belief. Even if Harry were a total moron who couldn't see that the people he cares most about, the only friends in his entire life, are utter bastards, we would have to believe that these people were capable of pulling this maskirova off in the first place.

    Since they are described as being pushy, arrogant, and rude I can't buy that.
     
  3. jjack1003

    jjack1003 Second Year

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    i did not like this fic at all.
    the whole story was literally a time waste.
    so much stuff was redundant. fudge and umbridge's trial did not have to be 3 to 4 chapters long.
    the story was not even going anywhere. harry got out of azkaban and took his revenge. thats it.
     
  4. slickrcbd

    slickrcbd Squib

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  5. James018

    James018 Second Year

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    Saw the title, checked and realised I favourited this back in the day. Read the first few paragraphs and threw up a little in my mouth. Deleted from favourites. Negative infinity/5.
     
  6. Methos

    Methos Seventh Year

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    As it goes for revenge fics it sucks.