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Good Minato alive stories?

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Cas, Apr 27, 2014.

  1. Cas

    Cas Slug Club Member

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    Hey, Looking for any good, or at least 3 star stories that have Minato alive after the kyuubi attack.

    Don't really care either way what happens to Kushina, but rather it still be mostly Naruto centric, either with or without the kyuubi sealed within him.

    Cheers.
     
  2. Knyght

    Knyght Alchemist

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    Naruto: Ouroboros is probably worth 3 stars. An older Naruto with both parents, trained by Orochimaru and has a jinchuuriki sister.
     
  3. Cas

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    Looks interesting, cheers Knight504.

    Any more?
     
  4. Knyght

    Knyght Alchemist

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    Team Tobi but there's wasn't a Kyuubi Incident this time.
     
  5. cash0maker

    cash0maker Third Year

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    How about a Minato centric story, from childhood to legend?
     
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  6. Hachi

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    @cashomaker : The girl from whirlpool is probably the best you'll find with that criteria.
     
  7. cash0maker

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    Well there was this story of an AU Naruto winding up in the past and taking his father's place, but I can't find it now.

    This is what I remember of it:

    1)Naruto was young, deaged,friends with sasuke's father.
    2)Take's chunin exam in mist.
    3)Hate's Danzo.
    4)Has a Uchiha mentor.
     
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  8. Euroclydon

    Euroclydon High Inquisitor

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    While not the same story, here's one with the same basic premise that's in our WBA. Unfinished, but It's excellent.

    Also, I'll second the Rec for Girl From Whirlpool.


    Geeze, this is depressing. A lot of good Naruto fics lay abandoned in our WBA. it's an elephants' graveyard in there /:
     
  9. Klackerz

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    The choices make up history

    Here is the fic you were thinking of. I remember it being good.
     
  10. Hachi

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    Edit : nevermind.

    Thanks klackerz, I thought that story had been deleted.
     
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  11. Rache

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    Signs.

    Well, this fic is one of a kind.
     
  12. Raijin

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    Kind of fits what you want but this is my personal favorite https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4277029/1/Across-Dimensions-Parting-Reality-s-Veil

    Edit: Summary: "AU/AD. Namikaze Naruto has led a charmed life under the protection of the Fourth Hokage. But now, after sacrificing himself for his home, he finds himself waking up in an entirely new world, surrounded by a village that despises him."
     
  13. Cas

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    Yea I remember reading this in the wba and enjoyed it, just wish it would update again.

    I might be one of the only ones, but I'm not a massive fan of the girl from whirlpool, I just don't like how Minato is portrayed. While the author does try to make him strong but not over powerful, to me he just comes across as a pussy. Getting scared at going against other opponents, and I couldn't ever see Minato, even as a young kid as being scared to face anyone.

    Yea Steal my thunder god is awesome, shame that it's only updated sporadically.

    Looks interesting, will give it a read later today, hangover permitting.

    Well that certainly looks different, but like it could be fun.

    I've read this and it's really good, but unfortunately looks abandoned.

    Starting to think I should have put up a list of the ones I've read but I just couldn't remember them myself.

    Cheers everyone who replied and rec'd fics you're all :awesome
     
  14. Knyght

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    You're not. It's been ages but I recall that Minato and Kushina both bugged me.

    I'd probably end up re-reading it if it updated though.
     
  15. Nauro

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    Yes, yes, I know.

    I should probably post at least those 6k words that have been hanging for half a year to the WbA, to give people something to read... I'll look over what I could share over the weekend.

    Otherwise, I'll see what I can do about a proper update.
     
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  16. Cas

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    If Sloth is taking props for Shezza updating, then I'm taking them for Steal My Thunder God updating :awesome :awesome
     
  17. Perspicacity

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    Morta's Priest's Torikaeru is a decent read with an alive Minato: Naruto is dead. Minato is alive. A monstrous exchange has taken place. The loss of a jinchūriki sends events into chaotic disarray as a distraught Fourth attempts to re-adapt to life without any of his family. To find the reason for the switch and to prevent a war, the Third forms a remarkable team...
     
  18. Cas

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    Yea I remember reading this a couple of years ago, and really enjoyed it. Shame that it appears to have stopped updating though.
     
  19. Roarian

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    You guys are making me feel so bad... :(
     
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