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Dead Link Harry Potter: The New Life by SilverAegis - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by cmuylistoooo, Dec 4, 2005.

  1. cmuylistoooo

    cmuylistoooo Fourth Year

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    Title: Harry Potter: The New Life
    Author: SilverAegis
    Rating: M
    Category:General
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2390801/1/
    Summary: AU & Time Travel Pre!HBP. After the war ended, Harry who is in his 7th year is accidentally transported into a AU where Neville is TBWL and where Harry is a normal boy. How will a Shadow Mage Harry get accustom to his New Life? Revised

    well i was really enjoying this story, but katrina hit and this author had a tought time....i guess he is back now and he updated....i enjoy his other stories as well...everyone has to read a powerful harry story once in a while...
     
  2. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    I liked this, a lot of Neville & Ron bashing as far as I can remember... I was kinda expecting sequel, but I don't see that happaning anytime soon.
     
  3. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    I didn't really like this story compared to his other 2 which are seriously better, and far easier to go along with. I find it hard to get into the stories where he goes back to being 11...just doesn't sit right!
     
  4. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    ... i thnik i remember this one.... isnt this the one that Sirius has an oriental wife in? ... if it is isnt this H/G?
     
  5. hubem

    hubem Squib

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    its not h/g...just looks alot like it in the beginning. Also the guy has pretty much made it so it wont be h/g now in the last chapter
     
  6. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    Yep there's definitely a bit of H/G going...and Harry gets just a tad hung up on her in this last chapter. Pretty decent though and I thought he developed the family interactions between Harry and others best of all of his stories. The fluff and WAFF seem a bit over the top but I found them acceptable.
     
  7. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Urgh, yeah, isn't this the one where the parents were encouraging two 11-year-olds to get together? They were actually waiting for Harry and Sirius's daughter to fucking kiss! They're 11! Well, Harry is 17, but that just makes it worse. Damn pedophile. And the fluff is way over the top! I mean, ok, he has never talked to his mother, but it seems like he has some sort of romantic attachment to her by the way he's always praising her and calling her beautiful. And I thought that whole "bro" "sis" thing was only in the States. I wasn't aware that people in the UK said that too. As it is, it's extremely rare that anyone would call their older siblings "big bro."

    And also, Harry "dances dirty" with a couple of 7th years. What girl would grind with an 11-year-old? This guy seriously has something going wrong in his head.

    And this is the story with all the anime crap isn't it? Like the huge sweatdrops at the back of the heads, the falling down anime style, and the "big scary heads" that suddenly grow when Hermione gets angry. Yeah...why the hell is this shit in Harry Potter?

    I think that speaks for itself...
     
  8. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Dont ask... sreiously... dont ask... i know a few... hell at 12 I dated a 17 year old for the month and a half that i was 12... then the 4 year rule kicked in... really... it only lasted about 3 months and the farthest i got aside from a few tongue-y kisses was a bit of grinding at a party....

    but yeah... Im an anime fan.. no denying it... but all the anime shit in this is just bothersome and annoying...
     
  9. Redeye

    Redeye Penultimate Lurker DLP Supporter

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    a little to harry/ginny for me.
    *gag*
     
  10. Necrule Paen

    Necrule Paen DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    I tried this fic but once it got to the point of a 11 year old dancing dirty with the older chicks then I just couldn't read it anymore. That is something I expected stained future to produce. It served no further purpose other than for him to live out a fantasy he once had through Harry. It would take a spectacular ending to the whore and the beaver to get me to continue reading and I probably would just read that and then forget this fic all together.
     
  11. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Going against all that ive preached here... I actually Sort of like this even with the implied and actual H/G moments... so meh.. see mid.. i can be fair to even that which i hate with a fiery passion that rivals hells hottest flames! :p ...not the greatest fic in the world but meh... entertaining at least
     
  12. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    *hands you a porno*

    I was going to give you a cookie.. but it seemed kinda childish, and well.. a porno contains cookies in a manner of speaking. :twisted:
     
  13. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    I just read this fic...not bad. A few...ehhhh...moments, such as the dirty dancing, but coming from a mental aged 18 year old with a bunch of drunk Gryffindor girls I can see it happening.
     
  14. Hubert

    Hubert First Year

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    :shock: Another 'shadow mage' fic. That's the second I’ve seen on DLP.net in as many minutes. I remember starting this fic awhile ago. I can't remember why I stopped reading, then again I can't remember what I had for dinner last night, so that's no real surprise. I'll have to give it another look.
     
  15. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Rofl, more uber-kewl shadow powahs!
     
  16. RagefulLlama

    RagefulLlama Seventh Year

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    All of this guys stories are shadow!mage Harry where the inspiration came from thor or some similarily named guy. Thor Nadira I think it is but I know I either spelt it wrong or am thinking of another ghuy all together (1 in the morning here XP)

    I love this one honestly this kind of story the backbone appeals to me. He has another *ok* one and another one I read just because I like this guys other two fics as some kind of reader loyalty thing.
     
  17. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    we are soooo gonna get the shit sued out of us if a concerned parent ever turns up here >_<
     
  18. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    Yah, especially with all these 13-14 year olds around the forums...assuming that's their real age, which I have no reason to doubt.

    Maybe you could add a disclaimer or warning at the registration agreement thingy or whatever. But really this is nothing compared to the online game forums. I saw these mid aged men flaming each other's offsprings (not mothers, like daughters) outside the flame/rant catagory. The guy apologized later but...whoa O-O :shock:

    Actually I think someone else came up with the baseline concept of shadow magic before that. Story called HP and the Fourth Power (I think) had Harry being infused with some demon assassin and he could shift in and out of the darkness. Interesting concept, definitely could have more uses I'm sure. I got a few myself.
     
  19. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Bah, we got a sick and perverse section already, so we're fine, or rather we're already in the shitter, heh.

    Not to mention anyone looking for Dark stories to read is mostly likely a good bit more mentally mature then their age anyhow. While their light friends are reading H/G fluff, they're reading fics with Harry banging an older woman, and murdering folks left and right.

    Think we're covered +)
     
  20. Goddess of Ran

    Goddess of Ran Sixth Year

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    The story was alright I suppose but I have to agree with the others when it comes to certain things. And 11 year old Harry dirty dancing with 17 year old girls? I know he became somewhat popular but I really don't think anyone would go that far if they wanted to get near him.

    Also I think he'd be better suited writing under the ANIME category, specifically under RANMA 1/2. He seems to like that doesn't he? :p
     
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