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Complete Here I Come by Dark Syaoran - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Dark Syaoran, Oct 19, 2005.

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  1. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Oct 19, 2005 #1
    Title: Here I Come
    Author: Dark Syaoran
    Rating: M
    Pairing: None as of yet.
    Category: Action/Adventure
    Summary: After Dumbledore’s death, Harry vows to avenge the people whose lives have been destroyed by Voldemort and his followers, while also extracting a little revenge for himself and decides that doing it alone is the best thing to do. Will training himself be enough for what lies ahead? Only time will tell. Dark!Harry, Independent!Harry, Vampire!Harry, Post-HBP.

    Link: DLP.Net

    Link: PatronusCharm.Net
     
  2. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Oct 19, 2005 #2
    good on you... ive read it but am too lazy to review on FF most times... i do like it thoguh.. excited to see your direction..

    and for Nyx's sake.. update!
     
  3. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Oct 20, 2005 #3
    Just about to send the third chapter to Midknight for beta. Be out as soon as I get it back.
     
  4. Lord Necros

    Lord Necros Slug Club Member

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    What pairing is it going to be??
     
  5. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I have no idea. I'm thinking none right now but one might pop up somewhere maybe. Definitely not Harry/Ginny.
     
  6. Cervus

    Cervus Raptured to Hell

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    Oct 20, 2005 #6
    I've been reading this, enjoying it as well. I have tried to review the second chapter on ff.net a couple of times now, but ff is being a retard with me and won't let me.

    I'll review next time ff lets me.
     
  7. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Oct 21, 2005 #7
    be nice to do a pairing away from cliche, main reason I choose to stick the Patil twins as a primary ship in mine
     
  8. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    Oct 21, 2005 #8
    Do Harry/Cho.

    ...Yeah, I know it isn't happening, but I had to try. :p
     
  9. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Cho is higher on the list than you might think.

    If I can fit a pairing in, I will. The most probable thing that will happen is that he just fucks a few of them because he is bored. Thinking an OC french girl that's at Bill's wedding for a nice shag, just to piss Ginny off.

    Might have a big break-up of the 'Golden Trio' as well. That will happen if I use the potion idea for Ron and Hermione. She did act pretty weird during sixth year, very unlike herself. It's possible.
     
  10. Burt

    Burt Fourth Year

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    Oct 21, 2005 #10
    Ron's not got the right sense of humor to give someone a love potion and then turn them down.
     
  11. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Who said Ron was slipping it to her at first? ;)
     
  12. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Chapter 3 is up at FanFiction.Net... has been for ages but I forgot to say anything. Heh...

    Chapter 4 is nearly complete. Could be out tomorrow or the next day if I work on it right now and have Midknight beta it.
     
  13. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    Nov 14, 2005 #13
    This story is fucking good, need more chapters coming! i seriously think someone should do like a Hufflepuff that goes bad because there dating Harry! has it been done though? If so can someone hit me with a link to it?
     
  14. DGD

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    However much I'd like to bludgeon you with a link, I'm afraid I haven't found any of that sort :p .
     
  15. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I've seen a story with that Zach Smith dude as a dark wizard but he wasnt dating Harry... Heh.

    Don't know if I've seen one where Susan or Hannah go bad because of Harry though. Hell, i've only read a few thats got those pairings at all! Pretty rare those pairings are.
     
  16. Lord Necros

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    Nov 14, 2005 #16
    yo make this dark cho dark Daphne greengrass dark tracey davis
     
  17. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Nov 24, 2005 #17
    ive been reading it for a while, and I love it.

    It kinda embodies all that I look for in a fic, and I like your idea of not doing a solid ship. I hate it when a good fic turns bad because an author sudenly realises "oh dear, its been 3 chapters since i mentioned his girl friend, now she's broken up with him and he'll have to spend the rest of the fic trying to get back together with her and angsting over not having her to sit next to and not do anything else with"

    This fic is good as it is, give him a couple of flings to make others jealous, but don't give the fic over to a ship. PLEASE. Im begging you.
     
  18. midnightpoppy

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    Nov 28, 2005 #18
    Personally, I thought this was really good.

    Vampire!Harry? I'm looking forward to that! I like fics with a vampire or werewolf Harry, especially when combined with an independent!Harry. Brilliant plot, in my opinion.

    I agree with the view of lots of ships. A jealous Ginny is my sort of Ginny, but I also think romance shouldn't play a huge part in the fic. Have as many pairing as you want, but definately don't focus anything around them! I can't really see Harry with anyone right now, anyway. He probably has more important things on his mind that knocking up a few girls!

    Please update this soon!
     
  19. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Be updated very soon. Sorry about the wait, my computer shat it's self and its been in the shop for two weeks.
     
  20. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I'll get to that msg in a bit Dark, going to be a bit before I can read longer then about 30 seconds in a burst, lol
     
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